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कुछ गहराई…

एक मैं था और कुछ लोग थे
कुछ लोग थे जो अपने थे
कुछ अपने थे जो करीबी थे
कुछ करीबी थे जिनकी बातें थी
कुछ बातें थी जो झूठी थी
कुछ झूठ थे जो वादे थे
कुछ वादे थे जो टूटे थे
टूटे वादे थे जो चुभते थे
कुछ चुभन थी जो दुखती थी
कुछ दुःख थे जो सहते थे
कुछ लोग थे जो अपने थे
कुछ अपने थे जो दिल में रहते थे

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Not organized, But you will not find it messy. Not punctual, But will be there at right Time. Not supportive, But will be there, when needed. Not a writer, But you will find this interesting.

48 thoughts on “कुछ गहराई…

  1. Hii Rohit! I loved the flow of this poem, the way you connected each line to the previous one, I reallly like that.

    And obviously, aapne jo strong emotions portray kiye hain, ‘Betrayal’ and ‘Painful’ wale emotions, they came out as an intense story narrated in a few words. Really appreciate this writeup. ☺☺🙌

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    1. Hello Chandni !! Thanks you so much for your awesome comment.
      I am glad that i m succeeded in conveying the emotion of the poem.
      aapke comment padh k i am thinking to write more and add up some more points in this poem.

      Thank you so much for your tremendous support 🙂

      Liked by 1 person

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