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कुछ गहराई…

Posted on by Rohit Nag

एक मैं था और कुछ लोग थे
कुछ लोग थे जो अपने थे
कुछ अपने थे जो करीबी थे
कुछ करीबी थे जिनकी बातें थी
कुछ बातें थी जो झूठी थी
कुछ झूठ थे जो वादे थे
कुछ वादे थे जो टूटे थे
टूटे वादे थे जो चुभते थे
कुछ चुभन थी जो दुखती थी
कुछ दुःख थे जो सहते थे
कुछ लोग थे जो अपने थे
कुछ अपने थे जो दिल में रहते थे

Author:

Not organized, But you will not find it messy. Not punctual, But will be there at right Time. Not supportive, But will be there, when needed. Not a writer, But you will find this interesting.

48 thoughts on “कुछ गहराई…”

  7. Hii Rohit! I loved the flow of this poem, the way you connected each line to the previous one, I reallly like that.

    And obviously, aapne jo strong emotions portray kiye hain, ‘Betrayal’ and ‘Painful’ wale emotions, they came out as an intense story narrated in a few words. Really appreciate this writeup. ☺☺🙌

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    1. Hello Chandni !! Thanks you so much for your awesome comment.
      I am glad that i m succeeded in conveying the emotion of the poem.
      aapke comment padh k i am thinking to write more and add up some more points in this poem.

      Thank you so much for your tremendous support 🙂

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