Mummy ने आज सुबह मुझे call लगाया
बोला, बेटा तेरे लिए एक अच्छा रिश्ता आया
जैसा उनको रिश्तेदारो ने बताया
वैसा mummy ने गुड़गान गाया
बेटा लड़का बहुत संस्कारी और नेक है
तुम्हे क्या पता mummy, शायद सब fake है
बेटा वो अमीर, इकलौता और U.S. में settle है
पर mummy अभी शादी करना मेरे लिए battle है
लड़का बहुत अच्छा और अपनी ही caste का है
अच्छा-बुरा decide करना अभी forecast सा है
अच्छा लड़का देखो लो, शादी अभी मत करना
फिर लड़का देख कर, क्यों किसी के साथ बंधना
तुमसे तो बात करना ही बेकार है
mummy मुझे तुमसे बहुत प्यार है
झूठी!! मुझे तुमसे बात ही नही करना है
शादी नही, अभी तुम्हारे लिए कुछ करना है
तुमसे तो तुम्हारे papa ही बात करेंगे
मान जाओ mummy, कब तक इस बात पर लड़ेंगे
:p good one…………kya baat hai rohit……..
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Thank you
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Haha. I liked the wriitng style 😀 I enoyed reading it 😀
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Thanks Kavita !!..i was experimenting with my style so just thought to share with u guys.
I m glad u liked it. 🙂 😀
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Yes you’re successful in your experiment 😁
It’s really nice. Okay so shall I expect some more posts in this style
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this should be question for 1 crore in KBC 😀
joke apart even i m not sure …that i can continue this style. 😉
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Haha okay so neutral lock kia jae 😀
Best luck 🙂
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Hehe …thanks ..:)
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Nice very nice
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Thanks
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A common problem everyone has to face to get over it, liked ur way of presentation.
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Its seems …..u are going through the same phase ;)…thanks bro 🙂
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Good read. Thanks for sharing!
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Thanks
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Bahut Khub Rohitji.
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Dhanywaad 🙂
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Swagat Hai Rohit ji.
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Ha ha ha… sach me mza aagya…
Zindgi ki kitaab par ye kissa bhi aata h,
or jab ye aata h to khoob santaata h…
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Thank u bhai….
i m glad , u like it 🙂
Just give a try to other posts, hope you will like it 🙂
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Ur wlcm bro… 🙂
👍Ohk bro 👍
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loved!!
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Thank u sir 🙂
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A very sweet post
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Thank u bhavika….i m glad u liked it 🙂
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liked the conversational tone of the poem….:)
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Thank you so much sunaina. I m glad u liked it 🙂
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Bahut khub
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Dhanywad 🙂
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Haha… That’s so cute. 😀
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Thank you so much Vaidehi, glad u liked. It 🙂
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Great efforts Rohit ji…Well done
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Thank you so much 🙂
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