भूल कर पुरानी गलतियों को,
चलो एक नयी शुरुआत करते है |
निकाल कर कड़वाहट मनो से ,
अच्छी-अच्छी कुछ बात करते है ||
भूल जाये सारी बुरी यादे,
पैदा ऐसे हालात करते है |
डूबने के एक दूसरे की आँखों में,
चलो फिर कुछ मुलाकात करते है ||
जब मंजिल है हमारी एक ही,
क्यों न सफर भी एक साथ करते है |
भूल कर पुरानी गलतियों को,
चलो एक नयी शुरुआत करते है |
Beautiful
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Thanks 🙂
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Very nice
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Thanks so much 🙂
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Positive words……well written!
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Thanks so much 🙂 for ur beutiful words ❤
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Welcome Rohit!
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Wow, very nice poem. Nice words. Loved it. And yes very Positive, telling the reader to Forget the bad past and bad mistakes and Start Afresh A New Life.
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Thank you so much Cattie…..yeah actually its very neccesary to forget ur past and start a fresh life …..any bad phase or any bad past cant spoil our whole life. Thank you so much for sharing ur thoughts 🙂
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Nice
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Thank you Shalini 🙂
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Ek aur achhi rachna…
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Dhanyvad dost 🙂
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बहुत सुंदर रचना !!!
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Dhanywad 🙂
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Awesome
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Thanks Neha 🙂 i m glad, u liked it 😉
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I loved it
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Very beautiful
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Thank you so much Girija ji
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If you get chance to start a new journey again with someone special then you are the luckiest person.
Loved this poem.
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Yeah but only if we get a chance 😉 amd its very hard to start a new journey with same trust and with same excitment :)… Thanks for sharing your thought 😀
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kya baat kya baat kya baat…. positive ban gaya mahaul…aapne likha humne padha …nayi survaat ne dastak bi de di dil me umang si uthi hai 🙂
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Ohh wow….thank u so much madame 🙂 …. …hume khushi hui ki ye aapko pasand aayi (Y)
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it really sound beautiful. ..shabdo ko achche se piroya hai ..
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Thank you so much Krrishna….just give a try to other posts ..hope u will like them also
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Wonderful!
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Thanks 🙂
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Good
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Thanks
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I loved it
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Wow …..Thanks Neha for such a beautiful comment 🙂
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वाह-वाह,
क्या बात है बहुत खूब रोहित जी.
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Dhanywad SAGAR Ji
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Aapka Swagat Hai Rohitji.
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Lovely poem for rebegning of a life.
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Yeah…but in real life it is very hard to re begin life or any relationship.
Thanks you so much, i m glad u liked it 🙂
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Yeah.u r true.
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🙂
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Wowww! Now this is something positive and sweet. This makes me smile hehe. ☺☺ Nicely written. This brings hope. 🌟
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I can’t stop without using ur favriout word…..yaaayyy ( for this tym only)……thank you so much for such a beautiful comment 🙂 ……its only sometimes i wrote negative…otherwise postive like this only 😀
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Aww! Okay okay, you can use it sometimes. 😻😹
Yes, I feel so happy reading positive posts, keep writing. ☺☺
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Ohhh nice…even i like to write postive one only 🙂
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Hehe, nice! ☺☺
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