इंतज़ार है तेरी एक झलक का |
जानता हूं तेरे पास काम बहुत है ||
व्यस्त है तू अपने चाहने वालो में |
माना की जग मे तेरा नाम बहुत है ||
तो क्या जो टूट रहा कोई इंतज़ार में |
तेरे लिये ये भी आम बहुत है ||
बिता ले कुछ वक़्त हमारे साथ भी |
दिल में हमारे भी अरमान बहुत है ||
रूबरू है तू मेरे इस सफर से
फिर भी तू अनजान बहुत है
हो सके ये आखिरी सफर हो मेरा |
क्योंकि रास्ते में मेरे तूफान बहुत है ||
बिखेर दे अपनी हँसी की चमक |
राहें मेरी सुनसान बहुत है ||
भूल न पायूँगा तुझे मर कर भी |
मुझ पर तेरे एहसान बहुत है ||
Omg i am speechless this is unbelievable …truely …awsome…
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wow…..such a beautiful comment from a beautiful writer..
Thank you so much 🙂
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This is epic
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i am in air…..Thank you so much , i m glad u liked it 😀
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Reminds me song ehsaan tera hoga mujh par…gadgad ho gaye hum toh 🙂
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Wah …kya gane se relate kia …now i am thinking to again also listen this song 😉
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शानदार जबरदस्त……..
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Dahnywad
Dhanywad 🙂
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Enticing!
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Thank you so much Sudershana 🙂
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Awww! I love the perfect rhymes and the flow in your poem. 😻 Bohot hi khubsurat likhe aap. ☺☺
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Wow…ur comment makes this poem more beautiful..
Thanks for your kind appreciation…thank you so much 🙂 ❤
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Keep Shining. ☺☺
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you too…and keep supporting dear 🙂
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Hehe, definitely. ☺☺
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I’d love to know what it says, but your choice of image encouraged me to drop by.
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ohh, thank you so much,
will try to translate it in English and will post 🙂
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I understand when it gets translated into another language from its original, sometimes it looses its true meaning.
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Yeah …and also rhymes also brakes because of the translation…but i ll try :)…keep smiling …keep writing 🙂
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Aaww Thank you, I would appreciate that.
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🙂
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वाह-वाह,
क्या बात है बहुत उम्म्ड़ड़ा रोहित जी
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Dhanywad sagar ji .
Its always good to get a comment from u 🙂
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Aapka Swagat Hai Rohit ji.
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Beautiful.
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Thanks bhai
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Bahut sunder.
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Dhanywad Aruna ji
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Shukriya.
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Beautiful
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Thanks 🙂
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Ah! From your *ehsaan* to my so deeply felt *ehsaas*. Simply amazing, Rohit. 🙂
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Thank you so much for such a beautiful comment….i m glad u liked it 🙂
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Wow! ☺
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Thank you 🙂
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Speecless literally
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Thank you so much 🙂
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लिखते रहिए आप अच्छा लिखते है
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Dhanywad 🙂
Thank you so much for your continuous support and motivation !!
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यार आपको पढ़ कर मजा आ जाता है
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Thank you so much .
I m glad you enjoyed it 🙂
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आहाहा बेहद उम्दा…. बहुत अच्छा लिखते हैं।
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Dhanywad….i m glad that u liked it 😉
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©इंतजार
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