गवाह थी जो कुछ हसीन पलो की |
तो कुछ पल ये मेरा हमदर्द था ||
गरमाहट थी फिज़ाओ में, तेरी यादों से |
तो टूटे सपने से मौसम थोड़ा सर्द था ||
ख़ूबसूरती समेटे था जो कल तक मोहब्बत की |
वही जमाना आज कितना बेदर्द था ||
आगे बढ़ गयी तू समझदार बन कर |
हमें नही, सिर्फ मुझे ही मोहब्बत का मर्ज़ था ||
खाते रहे दोनों कई कसमे साथ में |
क्या उन्हें निभाना केवल मेरा ही फ़र्ज़ था ?
मन को भा गया …भुलाया हुआ प्यार आज फिर याद आ गया
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Kya baat hai …ek line me hi maza aa jata hai 🙂
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आपकी कविता ने ये कमाल दिखा दिया….बहूत खुब लिखा….
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Dhanywad 🙂
its always nice to get a appreciation from an awesome writer 🙂
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Waise i m waiting for your posts also 🙂 bahut din se aapne kuch likha nhi
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आपने भुले बिसरे प्यार कि याद दिलायी है अब कुछ ना कुछ तो जरुर आवाज आयेगी दिल से…कविता coming soon….:)
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ohhh aisa hai to main to aapko roz hi kuch na kuch yaad dila deta hu 😉 becoz its always nice t read your poem ❤ waiting for your Kavita 🙂
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thank u rohit…:)
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Nice!!
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Thanks
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Brilliant, especially the end!
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Thank you so much Alok ji . I m glad u liked it 🙂
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Wah
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Thank you 🙂
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बहुत खूब लिखे जज्बात दिल को उकेर के रख दिया।जो छुपी थी कहीं मोहबत दिल में उसको शायरी में ही कह दिया।
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Dhanywad bhai. I m gald u understood the feeling of poem and liked it 🙂
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आगे बढ़ गयी तू समझदार बन कर |
हमें नही, सिर्फ मुझे ही मोहब्बत का मर्ज़ था ||
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वाह. . . मजा आ गया 😊😘
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Thank you so much Rishu….glad u enjoyed it 🙂
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बहुत खूब ..
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Dhanywad 🙂
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वाह , बहुत शानदार
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Dhanywad 🙂
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Bahut Badhiya !!
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Dhanywad 🙂
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Beautifully hit the nail.
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Thank you so much 🙂
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Bahut khoob…
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Dhanywaad 🙂
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Ooooo! 🙁 The last lines huh, they are sooo painful. Nicely written Rohit, I liked it very much. ☺☺
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Thanl you so much 🙂 🙂 glad u liked it
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Amazing
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Thank you so much 🙂
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Bahut achcha likha ha aapne
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Dhanywad 🙂
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