क्यों है परेशान,
क्यों सोचता है बेगाने का |
जख्म दे कर हँसना,
ये काम है ज़माने का ||
वो बात किसी और में नही,
जो बात तेरे सख्श में है ||
ये इल्म है, तू मान ले,
हँस कर जिंदगी बिताने का ||
तू वो नही, तू है अलग,
वक़्त है ये दिखाने का |
रब ने बख्शा है हुनर,
तुझे हर पल मुस्कुराने का ||
बहुत खूब
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Dhanywad Ajay bhai 🙂
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बढ़िया ☺️
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Thank u so much Abhay 🙂
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Welcome Rohit Bhai
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🙂 🙂
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beautiful..and motivating too..
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Thank u so much ma’am 🙂
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Pleasure was mine
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🙂 🙂
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Wonderful written n absolutely true.
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Thank you so much 🙂
Glad u liked it
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Most welcome.
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😊😆💜💔
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Nice
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Thank you so much Gaurav:)
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Bahut badiya 😊😊
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Dhanywaad 🙂 🙂
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Bohot khoob!!!
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Dhanywad 🙂
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😊
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वाह.. बहुत खूब
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Dhanywad Dhanywad 🙂
Glad u liked it
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Intense! ❤️
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Thank you so much Shreya.<3
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Hii Rohit! ☺ I lovvve this poem. Every line is so relatable, and for forever I’ve been reminding myself to remain positive, not compare myself to others, and that everyone has something special in them, but none of could’ve done what this poem did! 😻
It is soo inspiring, so positive. I took a screenshot to read whenever I feel low, and find an instant boost up. 😃 Thankyou for writing this. Btw, I have a doubt, इल्म kya hota? 🤔
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Wow, thank you so much for such a kind appreciation and beautiful comment <3.
ohh common !! you are so special , (if u want any type of proof, read your posts ❤ ) .
इल्म is something like "knowledge" (जानकारी ).
Thanks again for your support 😀
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Awww! Thankyou so much for your words. ❤😇 And yayy, we all are special in our different ways. ☺☺ Also, now I know another word, इल्म! 😃 thankyou!
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yes exactly everyone is special 😀
My pleasure madame 😀
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☺☺☺
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well written..utkarsh
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m very sorry rohit…dont hav delete option…comment delete hi nahi ho raha….its bfully written…rohit..plz bear with me…by mistake I typed some other name
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hahahaha….its ok ma’am 🙂
And thank you so much for your kind words and appreciation. 🙂
Keep smiling
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Yup…thanx
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Awesome..👍🏻
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Thank u so much 😀
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mast
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Thank u 🙂
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Self boosting motivation…..great poem…well written…dheere dheere zindagi zinda ho rahi hai …har kavita me khul kar bol rahi hai…
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Thank you so much 😀
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Great!!!
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Thank u so much 🙂
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जमाना बहुत तेजी से बदल रहा है जिसके साथ साथ चलना जरुरत और मजबूरी दोनों ही है।
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Ji sahi kaha aapne ……nhi to jamana aage nikal jayega ar hum peeche 😐😐😐
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This poem is so soothing. It gave me a kind of relief and peace. It is talking to me, directly to the heart. I lovvveeedd it… 😍 Keep writing.
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Thank u soooo much madam, glad u like it and finding it beautiful
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