उन्हें जरुरत थी हमारी तो,
खुद को मेरा हमदर्द दिखा रहे थे |
कोई न था साथ देने को उनका,
तो सपने हमे हर पल दिखा रहे थे ||
वक़्त आया सपनो के जीने का,
वो हर रोज़, हमे कल दिखा रहे थे |
हम नासमझ सच मान बैठे और,
वक़्त बदलते ही वो अपना रंग दिखा रहे थे ||
उन्हें जरुरत थी हमारी तो,
खुद को मेरा हमदर्द दिखा रहे थे |
कोई न था साथ देने को उनका,
तो सपने हमे हर पल दिखा रहे थे ||
वक़्त आया सपनो के जीने का,
वो हर रोज़, हमे कल दिखा रहे थे |
हम नासमझ सच मान बैठे और,
वक़्त बदलते ही वो अपना रंग दिखा रहे थे ||
Beautiful 👏👏
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Thank u 🙂
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Very nice Rohit! There are many people in life who change colours like a chameleon when the time comes to deliver. It is prudent to be wary of such people.
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Thank you so much ma’am ….its always nice to get such a beautiful comment from u 🙂 yes completely many ppl in life who changes colours when u needed them 😉
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वाह , बहुत खूब 👍👍👍
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Dhanywad Ajay 🙂
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बहुत अच्छा लिखा है।
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Thank u bhai for beautiful comment and your always support:)
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वेलकम रोहित
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आप यूँ ही अच्छा लिखते रहें।बस यही दुआ करते है।
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Dhanywaad 🙂
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Lovely!
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Thank u 🙂
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Superb one, mind blowing. Can relate with every lie.Specially loved last four lines.
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Thank u so mich Jyoti , glad u loved it 🙂 thanks again
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Beautifully written
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Thank you so much 🙂
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गहरी बात
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Dhanywad 🙂
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Tremendous
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Thanks Neha
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Beautifully crafted every emotion.
Happy weekend will glad to have you at my site too
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Thank you so much Sudershana …..surely will visit ur site…happy weekend to you too 🙂
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बेवफा सनम…..
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सनम बेवफा या वक्त बेवफा …..
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😛
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short but profoubdly arresting.
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Thank u so much Neha for.your kind words 🙂
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Yahi to duniya he nadaan bande…
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Hahaha nadaan tha par logo ne gyan de dia , 😉 so ab hum b samjh gaye 😂
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Nadaania hi aklmandi sikhati hein;tabhi viraania bhi gulista nazar aati he…..
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Ji shi kaha aapne , par jaruri nhi ki hanesha thokar kha kar hi seekha jaye 😉
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Seekhne ke liye gultiyaan jaroori hein..
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Ji wo to hai ☺par kabhi kabhi dusro se b seekha ja sakta h 😕
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👌👌👌👌
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🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻
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क्या भावना से भरी हुई कविता भाई वाह बहुत खूब रोहित जी क्या कहने आपके।
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Wow…..thank u for your kind words and appreciation .
Glad h liked it and appreciated my work😇😇😇
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Hawww, this is so relatable. 😕 There are so many people who do this haina? When they need us for something toh they behave good to us, and when the work is done, they juat disappear. 🙁 This is the hard truth of life. Well written. 👏
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First of all thank u so much 😇 this (poem) becomes more beautiful now 😍 yup there is so many …..so many and so many 😜 and many to whom u cant expect this ….but this all is part of life and learnings 😉😇 so everything is good and i believe in doing good, no matter people will b der or they will disappears 😇😇😇 thanks again Chandni 😍
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Yayy. Nice views Rohit. ☺ And it’s always a pleasure to read your work. 💙
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Wow 😍😍
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Wow 😍😍😍
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Kya khub!!!! Aap Rohit mann se mann ki baat likhte ho jo ruh ko chu jaati hain…ye sach hain ki aajkal log sabhi dusro ko thag kar ullu banakar aage barhte hain..zarurat par istemal krte…aap aise hi likhte raho…aur hum aapke har ek poem ko fursat se kabhi parhungi😁
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Thank u so much dear 😍😍😍
Your appreciation and support means a lot 🙏🏻 ji jarur hume khushi hogi agar aap waqt nikal k meri poem padhengi 😇😇 yup keep supporting, keep reading , keep writing and most important KEEP SMILING 😇
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