थक गया हूँ मैं,
सबको हँसाते हँसाते |
यूँ खुद मुस्कुराते मुस्कुराते ||
थक गया हूँ मैं,
अपनों से दूर जाते जाते |
दुनिया से रेस लगाते लगाते ||
थक गया हूँ मैं,
खुद को मजबूत करते करते |
हर रोज़ खुद से लड़ते लड़ते ||
थक गया हूँ मैं,
खुद का मन रोकते रोकते |
आँखों में अश्क़ सोखते सोखते ||
बस हो गया, अब और नही |
इस दुनिया से कोई दौड़ नही ||
खुद को खुद के अरमानो में,
आज खोने देते है |
खुला छोड़ अपने ख्वाहिशो को,
दिल को हल्का होने देते है ||
चेहरे से मुस्कान हटा कर,
आँखों को रोने देते है |
टूट रहे थे सपने जो अंदर,
उनको भी आज़ाद होने देते है ||
Striking one..n last lines are very soothing….❤
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Thank you so much for you kind words and appreciation.😇
Glad u liked it 😍
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लाज़वाब 👏👏👏👏
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Dhanywad bhai 🙂
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😊🙏🙏
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Behad sunder
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Thank you so much ma’am for your kind appreciation 😇
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Too good 😊😊
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Thank u so much Sapna 😇
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एक खूबसूरत रचना
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Dhanywad Gaurav bhai 😇
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Shandar jabardast…. 👌👍
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Thank u so much Pavan 🙂
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बहुत सुंदर भाव 😊😊😊👍
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Dhanywad Ajay bhai 🙂
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👏👏👏👏 excellent… Touchy !!
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Thank you so much Arti 🙏🏻
Glad u liked it😇
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Awesome!!
Dil Chu Liya 🙂
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Thank you very much for you kind appreciation😍
Glad u liked it 😇
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Welcome!!!
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☺️☺️☺️
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बहुत सुंदर !!
रचना सजीव लगी ।
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Dhanywad Sarita ji 😇
Glad u liked it:)
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zindabaad.. khoobsoorat rachna..
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Dhanywad dost 😇
Glad u liked it ☺
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बहुत खूब
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Dhanywad 🙂
Glad u liked it 😇
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Heart soothing. Very beautiful 💙
Have a great day. Will glad to have you at my site too
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Thank you so much😇
Sure will visit urs site ☺️
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सही है. दूसरों के बदले अपने लिये जीना ज्यादा ज़रूरी है.
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Correct, dusro ko khush krte krte hum khud se dur hote jate hai 🙂
Thank you so much for your thought
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Read such a quality work after long time.. Good one!
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Thank u so much bro ☺️
Glad u liked it and shared ur thought in such a kind word 😇
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Beautifull….
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Thank u so much 🙂
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एकाकी…..मराठी आणि हिंदी भी शब्द है….आपकी वजह से आज पता चला…😊
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ohh aisa !…..chaleye acha hai waise marathi me iska kya matlab hota hai ? 🙂
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Ekaki yaane joh bilkul akela pad gaya ho….akela ho….
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👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻thanks
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बहुत ही अच्छी रचना है।
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Dhanywad Rajani ji 🙂
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Nice penned.
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Thank u so much 😇
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rohit wonderfully written….just loved it
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Thank u so much ma’am ☺
Glad u loved it 😇
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😊
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You have that magic in poetry Rohit,always mesmerising
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Thank u so much Neha for ur kind words ☺
Keep smiling😇
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Good post.
Any tips on gaining such audience?
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Thank u very much
Keep posting on regular intervals 😍
All the very best dear👍🏻
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Beautifully written…it changed my mood completely…
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Thank u so much for ur kind words 🙂
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Beautifully penned..
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Thank u so much ☺️
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Ahaaan. Such heart touching lines. I could relate myself to your words. 😐 And you’re right, sometimes crying helps relieve all the pain. I really really like the ending, it’s so pacifying. 😃💙
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wow , this is one of the best comment any writer can get, that reader can relate herself from poems ❤
Yup really crying helps a lot sometimes , thank u so much _/\_ i m really glad u liked it.
and your comment make this poem more beautiful 🙂 🙂
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Rohittt! ☺ Hehe, so sweet of youu. But, it’s how you write that gets us attached to your words. 😇 And bohot saare poems bache hain abi toh huh. I’m reading one poem per day. 😂😂
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Thank u so much Chandni 😇😇😇 oh is it …..heheh okies will wait for feedbacks 😜
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Yayyy! 🙆
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Hey Mr writer ..first of all what an apt title 😘 I like the formation Nd loved the end…
Simple words but deep impact….this is the beauty of your poem…keep up the good work ….😃
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Hahaha will convey ur appreciation to my frnd ….actually one of my frnd suggested that title 😍😇
And thank u so much for your honest comments and feedback 😇😇😇🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻 keep reading , writing and smiling dear
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Too good
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Thank u so much
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©एकाकी जीवन
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