तेरी आँखों में खो जाना हो,
या फिर तुझ पर प्यार जताना हो |
देर हो जाती है मुझसे ||
तेरे मिलने पर मुस्कुराना हो,
या फिर दूर हो जाने पर आंसू बहाना हो |
देर हो जाती है मुझसे ||
चाहे वो तेरा जाना हो,
या फिर रोकने के लिए मेरा आवाज़ लगाना हो |
देर हो जाती है मुझसे ||
चाहे वो तेरी एहमियत बताना हो,
या फिर मेरा दर्द तुझसे छुपाना हो |
हमेशा देर हो जाती है मुझसे ||
क्यों बढ़ गयी इतनी जल्दी आगे तू,
मैं आया था तुझे रोकने,
पर तू न थी मेरे जहान मैं,
थोड़ा तो और इंतज़ार कर लेती |
जानती तो थी, देर हो जाती है मुझसे ||
Amazing👏👏👏
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Thank u so much Kumar 🙂
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Rohit! This is sooo beauutiful! ☺☺ Loved your rhymes, and your story huh. Lovely this is. I wish she reads this someday. ☺💙
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Thank you so much Chandni 🙂
Blessed , Thanks again for your kind words.
hahaha 😛 ❤
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Yayy! 😸☺
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Waah bhai. Gajab.
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Dhanywad bhai 😇
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Good one.
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Thank u so much Abhay😇
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क्या बात जितना कहे काम होगा………नायक का तड़प……लाजवाव
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Ji dhanywad , khushi hui ki aapko pasand aaya 🙏🏻
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💐
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🙏🏻🙏🏻
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Aw heart melting now…..with your romantic poem….kavita me dub jaane ko dil kar raha hai….
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Thank u so much Sonali 😇
Is this really good?
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Yaah its too good. mujhe to lagata hai…it should be release as bollywood song in future….
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Bas madame bas 🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🙈🙈
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Bhai mast h yaar 👌👍
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Thank u so much bro 😇
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बहुत शानदार😊😊
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Dhanywad Ajay bhai 😇😇
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Badhiya without any delay!
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Hahaha dhanywad 😇
Isme mjhse der nhi hoti 😉
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बहुत खुबसूरत !!
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Dhanywad 🙂
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Great work👌👌
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Thank you so much 🙂
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देर कितनी भी हो..मोहब्बत कही न कही ज़िंदा रहती है…ज़िन्दगी मोहब्बत से कुछ सीखती क्यों नहीँ..!
Btw..very well written..how you’ve described acceptance of being late always.. is wonderful..❤❤
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Wah kya khoob farmaya hai aapne 👏🏻👏🏻
Thank you so much for your kind words. Although it is fiction , but yes i m also late many times 😉🤣😂
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So am i..🙊🙊 many times.. yes many times..😛😛
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Hahahaha 🤣 in my case , i can use always also🙄😜🙈
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Then…u must be a liar🙊 bcz to offset your delays.. you are suppose to cm up with fresh excuses also..😁
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Hahaha no no der is some twist in this, if i myself set some time then i ll always late 😉 like wake up 7 🙊🙊🙈
But if i committed someone , then i ll be on time* (t&c applied) 😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂
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Beautiful 🙂 Seems your own story.
Isn’t it….???
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Thank u so much 😇 na na its fiction only 😉
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Bahut khub , kya bat he 😊😊
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Dhanywad 🙏🏻
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देर हो जाती है बहुत खूब पर ये कहने में देर नहीँ करनी चाहिए बहुत खूब बहुत खूब बहुत खूब।
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Thank u so much 😇
Glad u liked it and thanks again for ur kind words 🙂🙂
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वेलकम।
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Your all work are worth reading, thank u for stopping by and giving me a chance to read them..
Keep penning down, you are blessed with very fine writing style.
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Thank you soooooooooooo much for your kind appreciation…its pleasure to read ur posts also .
Thanks again will try to keep writing and expecting same from u also 😉
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Sure, will try to give you more good reads 🙂
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बहुत ही अच्छा लिख लेते हैं गुण बातें लिख जाते हैं।
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Ji dhanywad 🙏🏻🙏🏻 khushi hui ki wo baatien aapko pasand aayi …..keep smiling and keep reading 😇
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गुण की जगह गूढ़ है
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🙏🏻
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बहुत खूब..
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Dhanywad bhai 🙏🏻
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Heart touching….
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Thank u so much 🙏🏻
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Yahi galti har baar insaan kar baithta he-aapki aur meri tarah.bahut sunder poem he-mujhe bhi mera maazi yaad dilaa gayi.
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Ji sukriya🙂 thanks for your always support and motivation 😍
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You are most welcome.
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