तेरे जख़्मो का अब तक,
दिल पर निशान था |
तुझे क्या लगा फिर भरोसा पाना,
तोड़ने जितना आसान था ||
सींचता रहा मैं फसल प्यार की,
और मुनाफे पर बस तेरा नाम था ?
क्या तू सरकार थी देश की,
या फिर मैं, भारत का किसान था?
तेरे जख़्मो का अब तक,
दिल पर निशान था |
तुझे क्या लगा फिर भरोसा पाना,
तोड़ने जितना आसान था ||
सींचता रहा मैं फसल प्यार की,
और मुनाफे पर बस तेरा नाम था ?
क्या तू सरकार थी देश की,
या फिर मैं, भारत का किसान था?
भाई यह कटाक्ष सरकार पे है या नायिका पर 😂
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अपना अपना नज़रियाँ है।
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वो तो है ☺️
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Ji kya kya nazariya ho sakta h🤔
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Abhay bhai 🙏🏻,
Ji humne to bas kuch lines likhi, dono nap gaye😜 waise kataksh to dono par tha…..par fark kisi ko na pade sayad 😉
Thank u so much for read 😇
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Kya baat hai, fark dono par na pade…
Sarkar badal dijiye aur naayika bhi 😂😂
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Ji sarkar ka to aap jante hi hai ki pure majority me hai……..ar naayika ka bhi kuch aisa hi haal hai, mera apna dil bhi unhe hi vote karta hai😜😜😂😂😂 so dekhte hai kya badla ja sakta hai 😉😉😉😉😉😉
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Jab janta udasin ho jaye aur lekhak aashik, kuch bhi nahi ho sakta 😂😂
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Hahaha being a lekhak humne to kataksh kar dia , ab nayika ar sarkar dono udaain rahe to ek lekhak b kya kre 😉
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Adhbhut……👌
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Dhanywad bhai 🙏🏻
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बहुत खूब ,सींचता रहा में फसल प्यार की.. वाह वाह!
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Thank u so much 🙏🏻
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Short and precise presentation
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Thank u so much Neha 🙏🏻
Glad u liked it😇
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It’s a pleasure
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☺️☺️☺️
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बहुत खूब !! एक तीर से दो शिकार…….बङी अच्छी कविता लिखी है अौर व्य़ंग भी किया है।
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Ji dhanywad 🙏🏻
Khushi huyi ki aapko pasand aaya 😇
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Bful Rohit…so well compared
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Thank u so much ma’am
Glad u liked it 😇
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Amazing 🙂
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Thank u so much Jyoti 😇
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The analogy in the last paragraph is great!
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Thank u so much ☺️
Gald u liked that analogy 😇 actually i was little bit scared ki kuch weird sa na lage 😉 but glad u like it 😇
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Nicely put… 🙂
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Great Poem!! Thanks to share!
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वाह बहुत बढ़िया
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Dhanywad bhai 😇
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Wonderful.say to abhay dt if he not know about love,has no right to give negative comment.he do’nt know what is loyalty.
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Thank you ma’am for you kind words 😇
Abhay majak kar rahe….its ok 🤓
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Welcome dear.
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☺️☺️☺️
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वाह! Sarcastic hmmmmm…😉😉😉
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😂😂🙈🙈🙈 some times i feel ki khoon me hai 🤣😂 sarcasm
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😂😂😂 aiyooo…aisa😋
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😷😷😷
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बहुत खूब रोहित जी आपकी लेखनी एक पत्थर दो काज करने वाली है।
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पत्थर की जगह पंथ है
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😜☺️
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Thank u so much Rajani ji 🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻
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Lajawab!
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Dhanwad 🙂
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Beautiful…
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Thank u so much poonam
Just give a try to other post also😇
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Wahhhh kya tu sarkar thi aur main desh ka kisan tha???😅😂
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Hahaha…..aise hi 🙊🙈
Glad u liked it and appreciated 😇 u words matters 😇
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Now this was nice Nd interesting…
Your work is really good…
Just keep up the good work..😃
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Thank u so much dear 😍😍 keep supporting and most important keep smiling 😇
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