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मयखाना !!

जो होना था वो हो गया,
क्या फायदा अब पछताने का |
मनाता रहा खुद को मैं,
न कोई असर था समझाने का ||

एक ख़लिश थी जिंदगी में,
क्या दोष था इस ज़माने का |
ख़ुशी खोजता रहा दर-ब-दर,
पता था उसका, शहर के मयखाने का ||

न तुम थी, न तुम्हारी चूड़ियाँ,
वो खनक थी, जाम टकराने का |
भूलता था सब, तेरी आँखें देख कर,
ये रास्ता था, उन आँखों को भुलाने का ||

जो तड़प थी, एक झलक की,
ये जरिया था उसे बुझाने का |
बची थी अस्थियाँ, जो रिश्तो की चिता पर,
इंतज़ाम था मयखाने में, उसे भी बहाने का ||

Cheers to all readers 😉

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Not organized, But you will not find it messy. Not punctual, But will be there at right Time. Not supportive, But will be there, when needed. Not a writer, But you will find this interesting.

71 thoughts on “मयखाना !!

  1. Rohittt! ☺ It’s been time that I haven’t read anything from you. Wonderfully written! ❤ But this is sad naa, it’s veryy emotional. Also, tell me the meaning of “ख़लिश”. And the ending is so painful. Memories are hard to forget. 🙁

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  2. न तुम थी, न तुम्हारी चूड़ियाँ,
    वो खनक थी, जाम टकराने का |
    भूलता था सब, तेरी आँखें देख कर,
    ये रास्ता था, उन आँखों को भुलाने का ||
    बहुत सुन्दर

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  3. Wonderfully penned,dear!!if u write d word in ur poem at last “jalaane ka ya udaane ka”‘at place of “bahaane kaa””-then poem could be more impressive.bt do’nt worry all poem is a beautiful piece of emotions.weldone.

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    1. Thanks Aruna ji for such a great appreciation 🙏🏻
      Amd also for correcting me , will try to use that in my future poems 😇

      Your feedback and opinion always matters for me, keep reading and keep correcting me.
      And most important keep smiling and shining 😇

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        1. Ji hume acha laga ki aapne advice kia🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻…….ar sayar to hum b pal do pal h ki hai …..jamana to aj bhi aapko sunata hai ar kl b aapko sunana chahega 😇

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          1. Bus yunhi ye silsila chalta rahega…minya Ghalib,Jaunk,Meer……se….
            Tum aur uske baad bhi jab tak ye qaynaat rahegi;kabhi chup ke se kabhi gaate huye her dil dhadkta rahega……

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              1. Yeah.dear.it is symbol of soul n soul is part of God.when soul of heart is singing or tearing,whole universe is blossmed.if one day,all souls r dead then whole universe will be on deadline.it is eternal truth.

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