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मयखाना !!

जो होना था वो हो गया,
क्या फायदा अब पछताने का |
मनाता रहा खुद को मैं,
न कोई असर था समझाने का ||

एक ख़लिश थी जिंदगी में,
क्या दोष था इस ज़माने का |
ख़ुशी खोजता रहा दर-ब-दर,
पता था उसका, शहर के मयखाने का ||

न तुम थी, न तुम्हारी चूड़ियाँ,
वो खनक थी, जाम टकराने का |
भूलता था सब, तेरी आँखें देख कर,
ये रास्ता था, उन आँखों को भुलाने का ||

जो तड़प थी, एक झलक की,
ये जरिया था उसे बुझाने का |
बची थी अस्थियाँ, जो रिश्तो की चिता पर,
इंतज़ाम था मयखाने में, उसे भी बहाने का ||

Cheers to all readers 😉

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Author:

Not organized, But you will not find it messy. Not punctual, But will be there at right Time. Not supportive, But will be there, when needed. Not a writer, But you will find this interesting.

71 thoughts on “मयखाना !!

  1. Rohittt! ☺ It’s been time that I haven’t read anything from you. Wonderfully written! ❤ But this is sad naa, it’s veryy emotional. Also, tell me the meaning of “ख़लिश”. And the ending is so painful. Memories are hard to forget. 🙁

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    1. Thank u so much Chandni 🙏🏻
      Glad u liked it 😇

      Hahaha, ye memories are always hard to forget , thats y its called memory😜
      ‘Khalish’ means kisi cheez ki kami 🙈🙊

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  2. न तुम थी, न तुम्हारी चूड़ियाँ,
    वो खनक थी, जाम टकराने का |
    भूलता था सब, तेरी आँखें देख कर,
    ये रास्ता था, उन आँखों को भुलाने का ||
    बहुत सुन्दर

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  3. Wonderfully penned,dear!!if u write d word in ur poem at last “jalaane ka ya udaane ka”‘at place of “bahaane kaa””-then poem could be more impressive.bt do’nt worry all poem is a beautiful piece of emotions.weldone.

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    1. Thanks Aruna ji for such a great appreciation 🙏🏻
      Amd also for correcting me , will try to use that in my future poems 😇

      Your feedback and opinion always matters for me, keep reading and keep correcting me.
      And most important keep smiling and shining 😇

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        1. Ji hume acha laga ki aapne advice kia🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻…….ar sayar to hum b pal do pal h ki hai …..jamana to aj bhi aapko sunata hai ar kl b aapko sunana chahega 😇

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          1. Bus yunhi ye silsila chalta rahega…minya Ghalib,Jaunk,Meer……se….
            Tum aur uske baad bhi jab tak ye qaynaat rahegi;kabhi chup ke se kabhi gaate huye her dil dhadkta rahega……

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              1. Yeah.dear.it is symbol of soul n soul is part of God.when soul of heart is singing or tearing,whole universe is blossmed.if one day,all souls r dead then whole universe will be on deadline.it is eternal truth.

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  4. ..kya kavita likhi aapne…waah…. bina maykhane jaayein ..mehsus kar aaye ..pyaarwaale gum ko …maykhane ke nashe ko ….shukriya aapka….i will give title “छलकती कविता”…

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  5. Never have I been heartbroken, still this poem managed to choke my heart and throat.
    Overwhelming. Not willing to judge your poem because they are not just words but your feelings too.
    Stay blessed always😊

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