जो होना था वो हो गया,
क्या फायदा अब पछताने का |
मनाता रहा खुद को मैं,
न कोई असर था समझाने का ||
एक ख़लिश थी जिंदगी में,
क्या दोष था इस ज़माने का |
ख़ुशी खोजता रहा दर-ब-दर,
पता था उसका, शहर के मयखाने का ||
न तुम थी, न तुम्हारी चूड़ियाँ,
वो खनक थी, जाम टकराने का |
भूलता था सब, तेरी आँखें देख कर,
ये रास्ता था, उन आँखों को भुलाने का ||
जो तड़प थी, एक झलक की,
ये जरिया था उसे बुझाने का |
बची थी अस्थियाँ, जो रिश्तो की चिता पर,
इंतज़ाम था मयखाने में, उसे भी बहाने का ||
Cheers to all readers 😉
Wah
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Ji thank u
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Mast
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Thank u
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Rohittt! ☺ It’s been time that I haven’t read anything from you. Wonderfully written! ❤ But this is sad naa, it’s veryy emotional. Also, tell me the meaning of “ख़लिश”. And the ending is so painful. Memories are hard to forget. 🙁
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Thank u so much Chandni 🙏🏻
Glad u liked it 😇
Hahaha, ye memories are always hard to forget , thats y its called memory😜
‘Khalish’ means kisi cheez ki kami 🙈🙊
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😂😂 Haha, true. And yayy, new word added to my dictionary! ☺☺ Aur na thoda smiley smiley wala poem likhho na, why sad ones! 😹
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Hahaha, once u complete ur dictionary ….xerox kra k mjhe b de dena 😂😂😂😂
Hahahah ji madame 😉 aj kl bas funny ideas nhi aa rahe 😜
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Jii bilkul, but aapki dictionary pehle se humse jyada advanced hai. 😹😹
Huh, jaldi leke aao fir funny ideas. Mujhe comedy wala poem chaiye. 😂
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Hahaah to kya hua phir b xerox chaheye 😂
Funny idea k liye performance pressure 😂🤣🤣🤣🤣
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😂😂😂
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Boht hi sundar likha hai! 🌹❤️
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Thank u so much ❤
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Kya baat hai. Mazaa aaya. Likhte rahiye.
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Thank u so much 😎
Keep reading and keep smiling
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न तुम थी, न तुम्हारी चूड़ियाँ,
वो खनक थी, जाम टकराने का |
भूलता था सब, तेरी आँखें देख कर,
ये रास्ता था, उन आँखों को भुलाने का ||
बहुत सुन्दर
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Ji dhanywad 😇😇
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वाह बहुत ही अच्छा।
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Thank u so much Gaurav 😇
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Really nice poems!
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Thank u so much Natasha 😇
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😊
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Awesome Rohit
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Thank u so much Arvind 😇
Just give a try to other posts also , hope u will like them also
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Sure I will bro, you are too good with your creation…. Keep it up
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Thank u so much for such a kind word and appreciation 😇
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You deserve it..
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🙏🏻☺️
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Bahut badhiya
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Dhanywad 😇
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Wonderfully penned,dear!!if u write d word in ur poem at last “jalaane ka ya udaane ka”‘at place of “bahaane kaa””-then poem could be more impressive.bt do’nt worry all poem is a beautiful piece of emotions.weldone.
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Thanks Aruna ji for such a great appreciation 🙏🏻
Amd also for correcting me , will try to use that in my future poems 😇
Your feedback and opinion always matters for me, keep reading and keep correcting me.
And most important keep smiling and shining 😇
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Most welcome dear.
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U r d poet of future n me-me pal do pal ka shaayar hun….aaj log mujhe sunte hein;par kal jamana to aapka he.isliye advice kiya tha..
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Ji hume acha laga ki aapne advice kia🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻…….ar sayar to hum b pal do pal h ki hai …..jamana to aj bhi aapko sunata hai ar kl b aapko sunana chahega 😇
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Bus yunhi ye silsila chalta rahega…minya Ghalib,Jaunk,Meer……se….
Tum aur uske baad bhi jab tak ye qaynaat rahegi;kabhi chup ke se kabhi gaate huye her dil dhadkta rahega……
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Ji kya sahi baat kahi …..ar ho b kyun na
Wo b kya jamana jab dil hi na dhadke ar dil dkadkega to sayar b honge 😉😉😉
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Yeah.dear.it is symbol of soul n soul is part of God.when soul of heart is singing or tearing,whole universe is blossmed.if one day,all souls r dead then whole universe will be on deadline.it is eternal truth.
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wow…..how simply u defined the truth of universal …..in awe with your line …..great observation and great execution f words ….wow
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Thanks dear.
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.aap kal ke shaayar he. Jamaana aaj mujhe sunta he lekin kal aapķo sunega.isliye advice kiyà ….
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🙏🏻🙏🏻
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😊
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Cheers buddy! Just awesome 😍 as always rohit…keep it up👍
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Thank u so much dear 😍
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This is indeed sad, but beautiful.
You’ve compiled your emotions very beautifully…
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Thank u so much for your read and appreciation , hope u will like other posts also
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Yes I’ll read them too…
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Thanks 😇
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This one’s is wonderful.. so beautifully written.. n perfect bending of words..with emotions that connects.❤❤
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Wow….such a beautiful comment to make my day. 😍
Thank u so much for you beautiful and kind appreciation❤️
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My pleasure ofcourse..😆
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🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻☺️☺️☺️☺️
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..kya kavita likhi aapne…waah…. bina maykhane jaayein ..mehsus kar aaye ..pyaarwaale gum ko …maykhane ke nashe ko ….shukriya aapka….i will give title “छलकती कविता”…
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Wah …itni pyari to kavita bhi nhi thi jitna ye comment hai 😎😎😎
I have no words to thank u ☺️
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बहुत ही अच्छा लिखा है रोहित जी।
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Thank u so much rajni ji
Khushui hui ki aapko pasand aayi kavita!!
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Saari duniya hi maikhana he ,janaab.karo,pachtaao aur jaam pe jaam chadaaye jao..
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Waise uski aankhen b duniya hai
Ar aankho me nasha bhi hai 😜😜
To is hisab se b sari duniya maykhana hui 🙊🙈
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Teri aankho ke siva duniya me rakh kya he…..
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Uski baatien , uske sawal , uski julfe…sab kuch bawal 🤣
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Dis bawal is haqikat varna ghalib yun na kahta-ishq ne nikamma kar diya varna hum the aadmi kaam ke…
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wah wah ….kya timing hai ji , dil khush kr dia aapne 😛
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Chalo,kisi kaam to aaye hum.
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Ji ab aisa bol kar mere shabdo ko chota mat kareye….
it is always good to read u and getting comment from u 🙂
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Okay.welcome u forever.
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🙂 🙂
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Jiss reshtay ko anjaam Na de Sako , usse ek haseen mod dekr hi chod Dena chahie….
It was deep , emotional Nd beautiful ….
Keep it up😄
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Wah ….what a beautiful line…..i m overwhelmed 😇
Glad u understood feeling deepness and beauty of this poem . Thank u so much dear . Stay blessed
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Never have I been heartbroken, still this poem managed to choke my heart and throat.
Overwhelming. Not willing to judge your poem because they are not just words but your feelings too.
Stay blessed always😊
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Wow 😍 such a beautiful comment for my poem from such a nice poet 😇😇 thank u so much 🙏🏻 blessed 😇 keep smiling and keep writing ☺️
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