वो टूट रही थी,
मैं बचा नहीं पाता,
पर संभाल जरूर लेता |
वो परेशान थी,
मैं कुछ बदल नहीं पाता,
पर हँसा जरूर देता ||
वो थी क़शमक़श में,
मैं ख़त्म नहीं करता,
पर राय जरूर देता |
वो दूर जा रही थी खुद से,
मैं पास नहीं होता,
पर रोक जरूर लेता ||
वो रो रही थी मन में,
मैं सुन नहीं पाता,
पर समझ जरूर लेता |
गिर रही थी जिंदगी में,
मैं संभाल नहीं पाता,
पर हाथ जरूर देता ||
अकेले हो गयी थी वो,
मैं रोक नहीं पाता,
पर साथ जरूर देता |
कसम दे गयी दूर जाने की वरना,
मैं उसका हो नहीं पाता
पर उसे खो भी नहीं देता ||
वो दूर जा रही थी खुद से,
मैं पास नहीं होता,
पर रोक जरूर लेता ||
Bahut badhiya….
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Thank u so much ☺️
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Bahut khub
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Dhanywad 🙏🏻
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Bahut badhiya.,..
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Ji dhanyawad 🙏🏻
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Nicely expressed love
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Thank u so much 😇
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Beautifully described
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Thank u so much for ur kind appreciation 🙏🏻
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बहुत खूब।
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Dhanywad 😇
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Beautiful❤️❤️
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Thank u so much
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wonderful!
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Thank u ☺️
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बहुत खूब !!
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Dhanywad ji 🙏🏻
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Behad khoobsorat.
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Thank u so much for ur kind words
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हम दूर क्या हुए खुद से
तुमने तो हमारी रूह से
भी नाता तोड़ लिया …
वादे कहाँ गयी वो कसमे
तुम्हारी
क्या प्रीत किसी और
संग जोड़ लिया …?
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Wah ….kya baat kahi hai,,,,,first of all thank u so much for stopping and sharing your thought. 😀 and here is my lines in reply 😛
काश तेरी रूह से नाता तोड़ सकता,
काश किसी और से प्रीत भी जोड़ सकता,
जो तू दूर जा रही थी खुद से,
काश तेरे रास्ते खुद की तरफ मोड़ सकता | 😉
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आसान नहीं है सुनलो
मुझसे दामन बचा लेना
के रूह में उतर जाएंगे
तुम कुछ न कर पाओगे …
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दाग से क्या डरना,
दिल और दामन सब तुम्हारा है
रूह में उतरने का
तुम्हारा आलाप पुराना है
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गर न हो यकी तो आज़मा कर देख लो
तुम अपना दामन बचा कर देख लो
जो न हुए बेताब राहे उल्फत में
इश्क़ के अंजाम तक आक्र देख लो
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बेताब तो हम,
बिना आज़मा कर भी रहेंगे |
पता बताओ इश्क़ का,
अब तो अंजाम तक आ कर रहेंगे ||
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Hahaha…Nice…
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ji dhanywad 🙂
waise it was intresting to talk like that .
waise bahot khub likhti hai aap
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Aap bhi bohot accha jawab dete hai thanks …😊
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wo to bas sangat ka asar the madame 🙂
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Hahaha…shayri ka jawab shayri se dena … Aap bohot talented hai…
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kash ye koi mere ghar par bol deta ….
aisa sunane k liye unke kaan taras gaye hai 😉
waise aap b kam nhi hai
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Hahaha…thanks a lot…
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Ji koi info nahi dali hai yaha shanti se post karna chahti thi bas fb , twitter se dur…
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ohhh great 🙂 ……it will interesting to read ur posts 🙂
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Thanks…😊
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Wowww! 😻 Sooooo beautiful poem, Rohit. Such positive vibes huh. And the picture, it’s perrrfect! 💙
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Thank u so much Chandani 😍
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Huh, my pleasure. ☺😇
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👌👌👌👌
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Thank u so much dear 🙏🏻
Keep smiling 🙂
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Behad khoobsoort alfaaz hein-“vo kasam de gayi thi door jaane ki varna mein uska ho nahi pata magar kho bhi nahi deta”all lines r heart touching.
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Thank u so much ma’am
Ur words matters for me 😍
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Really,dt poem is amazing n still now,i m thinking about those lines of” Vo”.most welcome dear..
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wow thank u so much ma’am 🙂 it is always amazing to have u in my support _/\_
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Welcome dear.bless u.
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thank u
wish u same 🙂
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😊
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Loved the last stanza most…
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Thank u so much …. glad u liked it
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amazing lines…
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Thank u
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Wow you are tooo gOood i loved it
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Thank u so much 🙏🏻
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Writer with sincere heart makes poem even beautiful…
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Thank u ☺️☺️☺️
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NICE! U write Best 👏
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Thank u so much for your kind words ☺️
Just give a try to other posts , may b u ll like them also
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MOST WELCOME! U deserves the Admiration 😊
OFFCOURSE! 4Sure,Ulfat will give try 2 All 🖐🖑
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Thank u .
Ohhh so writer of loveurownlife is Ulfat👌🏻 beautiful name madame
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MOST WELCOME 🤗
YEH! I’m Ulfat writer of LOVEUROWNLIFE & THANKS 4 the Compliment 🙌
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Bahut khoob…
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Dhanywad 🙂
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That’s how serene the true love is..
Pyaar karna bhi aasaan nh h
Use bayaan Kar de wo poore alfaz nahi h
Jid hoti h isme paane ki
Par jo ad jaaye wo pyaar nahi hai.
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Thank you 😇🙏🏻
Wah bahut hi khoob kaha aapne 👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻
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Jese jazbaato ko zubaan mil Gyi ho….
Kya khoob likha h ….
Keep it up😃
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Thank u so much Shikha 😇😇😇
Glad u liked it
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Kya baat..!! Kya baat…! Kya baat…!
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Thank u bhai 😉
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If you could really be that person to someone, you are worth born as a human….
Simply loved it😊
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Yup agreed , if anyone can be that person it will really amazing 👌🏻👌🏻 thanks
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©वो टूट रही थी
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