अजीब दास्ताँ है,
पुरानी तश्वीरो की |
इनको देख भी नहीं सकता,
इनको फेंक भी नहीं सकता ||
अजीब किस्से है,
पुरानी यादो के |
जिन्हे सहेज भी नहीं सकता,
और परहेज़ भी नहीं कर सकता ||
अजीब सुरूर है,
पुराने सपनो का |
उनमे रह भी नहीं सकता,
किसी से कह भी नहीं सकता ||
वाह…
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Ji Dhanywad 🙂
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i was just ttrying to open your blog …but is it protected now ?
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Wait…
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okies
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Amazing, as usual.
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Thank you so much Pareen 🙂
Just give a try to other posts …may b u ll like them also
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Will do
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Thanks 🙂
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Wah wah…majja aagaya padhke..
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Thank u so much Sonali ji
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Awesome!
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Thank u so much 🙂
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Deserve it. Welcome☺
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🙂 🙂
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Bahut hi khub.Rohit ji khub likha hai.
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Dhanywad Sagar ji
Khushi hui ki aapko pasand aaya
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Aapka Swagat hai Rohit ji.
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🙂 🙂
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The dilemma is eternal and perhaps, life is beautiful because of those old dreams, long-lost memories…
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Yup agreed …. but some time its hurts ….. thank u so much for stopping and sharing ur thoughts 😇
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Waaah….jabardast..
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Dhanywad 🙏🏻
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यह दास्तान सचमुच अजीब होता है.
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Ji hota to hai.
Thanks for sharing ur thought
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Beautiful poem ♥️
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Thank u so much Siddhant 😊
Just give a try to other posts also
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Surely👍
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Really Mind Blowing…. Awesome
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Thank u so much arvind
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बहुत ही खूबसूरत…👌👍
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Thank u bhai
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Very Nice 🙂
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Thank u 😇
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रोहित जी आपने अजीब दास्तां बहुत ही अच्छा लिखा है। मुझे बहुत अच्छा लगा। जो मैं कहानी लिख रही हूँ उससे मैच करता है तो क्या मैं आपके नाम के साथ पुरानी तस्वीर के साथ मैच कर डालने की इजाजत है।
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आपकी कविता डालने की।
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Ji jarur….. u can use these lines 😇😇😇
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Thank you very much Rohit ji.
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Its my pleasure 🙏🏻 pls let me know once u complete ur story….i would like to read that 😉
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रोहित जी मरी रचना जिंदगी की यादें पुराने गीत गानोंऔर तस्वीरों की कहानी अपने जमाने की भाग 1सेलेकर8 तक पढना पड़ेगा और शायद आपने पढ़ा और सराहा भी है। आपकी कविता अगले अंक में डालने को सोच रही हूँ।
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Ji maine padha hai maine, bahut hi khoobsurat series hai ….ji jarur waqt milte hi main phir aapke blog pe aayunga ki kahin kuch miss na ho gaya ho mjse 🙈🙊
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मैंने आपकी कविता के साथ थोड़ा बदलाव कर कहानी बढाई है कहीं भी कुछ गलत हो तो निःसंकोच बताइएगा मैं सुधार करने दुंगी। लेकिन भाग सात पढने के बाद आठ पढिएगा तो समझ में आसानी से आएगा।
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Ji jarur 🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻 thank u so much for ur support and motivation 😇
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भाग 7मैंने अपना बनाया कविता डाला है। समय मिलते ही पढकर बताएगा कैसा लगा?
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Ji jarur 😊
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Ji thank u so much for your beautiful comment 🙏🏻
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Behtareen!!! 👏👏👏
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Sukriya 🙏🏻
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Superb lines… Kya sab shayar, pyaar main itne proficient hain?? Ki sirf shayari tak??
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hahahah ….interesting question 😉
waise aapko kya lagta hai 😛
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Well, shayar 2 tareeke ke hain ek jo sirf likhte hain sir impress karne ke liye… Aur doosre jo apne shabdon ka maan rakhte hain, phir likhte hain…
Pehle bahut mil jayenge, doosre se main milna chahoongi
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Wah kya baat kah di aapne ……now i m speechless ki khud ko kis category me rakhu …..but my writings are definitely not to impress any one 😉
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Zindagi ke tajurbe ne sikhaya, bol bachan lakhon hain, but jo apne shabd pe atal rahe, wo lakhon main ek
A man is nothing but the strength of his words… If only he/she would understand that
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Zindagi ke tajurbe ne sikhaya..
Bol bachan lakhon hain but jo apne shabd pe atal rahe, wo lakhon main ek.
A man is nothing but the strength of his words… If only he /she would understand that
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Yup completely agree 🙏🏻
And amazing comment 😇
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I just re read my comment… Somedays I shock and amaze myself 😂
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Haha no comments for above line but first was really amazing :p
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Hehehehehehehehe thank u.. Its my belief in life to be a woman who keeps up her words
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Its should be Shalini
And yes its not only belief …its trust ..its confident and its u ….so keep this belief high , high and high…….
And keep shining dear 😍
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Thank you.. I do and I will
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Glad that u do 😇😇
And will b happy to see u shining always
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Aww so sweet.. U too rohit
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Yes, yes the bitter truth which could not be digested or spit out…..hve to keep them intact as our individuality…it has all mixed to our inner self..lovely Rohit
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Yup 🤔 i was about to type ur name but suddenly realise u havent mentioned ur name on your blog….may i know ur name , if u dont mind .
And yay 👻 thank u so much for your kind words and appriciations
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Pearl….yeah …my name
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Oh ok 😉 so corrected sentence *
Thank u so much Pearl 😇
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Ohhh thankz dearie😁
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बहुत ठीक कहा अच्छा लिखा है आपने
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Dhanywad bhai 🙏🏻
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Beautiful photos, I confess that I tried to read your blog, but I do not understand a word of that language. I find it fascinating, maybe one day I’ll learn.
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Thank u so much for stopping by , u can read post from english category 😇 and i ll also try to post poems in english
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Good !!!
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