बता दे पता अपनी गली का
बिन देखे तुझे,अब गुजारा नहीं होता
खोया रहता हूँ दिन-ओ-रात तुझमे
होश हमें अब, हमारा नहीं होता
जानता हूँ, तेरा देख कर मुस्कुराना
इश्क़ का इशारा नहीं होता
जो समझ जाता दिल ये बात तो
मैं आशिक़ तुम्हारा नहीं होता
बता दे पता अपनी गली का
बिन देखे तुझे,अब गुजारा नहीं होता
जो होती खबर, तेरी दर की तो
शहरो में, मैं आवारा नहीं होता
होता पानी फिर भी नैन में,
पर दुःख से, वो खारा नहीं होता
तेरी एक झलक मिल जाती तो
इश्क़ में, दिल बेसहारा नहीं होता
बता दे पता अपनी गली का
बिन देखे तुझे,अब गुजारा नहीं होता
बहुत खूब रोहित !!!!
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Dhanywad Rekha ji 🙏🏻
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Awesome…
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Thank u so much Poonam
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waah waah mast aaj ki panktiya
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Thank u so much bro
Glad u liked it 😊😊
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aapki kavita padhte padhte,un galiyon tak pahunch gaye jahan pyaar panha leta tha,chod aaye the wo galiyan par aapki sunder kavita ne wahan phir se dil ko pahuncha diya…kya baat kya baat writer babu dil phir se khush ho gaya aapki kavita padhkar….
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Thank u so much for your kind words 😉 ur words matters for me 😇
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बहुत खूब। आपकी कविता में शायरी का टोन आने लगा है।
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Thank u so much Rajani ji 😊
So is that good or bad 😜
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Bahut badiya rohit amazing 😊😊
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Thank u so much sapna 😇
This means a lot
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वाह क्या बात
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Dhanywad bhai
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वाह क्या खूब लिखा है—-बता दे पता अपनी गली का
बिन देखे तुझे,अब गुजारा नहीं होता
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Thank u so much 😇
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Beautiful..Amazing…
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Thank u so much dear 😇
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👌👌👌
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😇😇😇
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Amazing rohit .
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Thank u so much Samta 😇
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Awesome
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Thanks Jyoti 😍
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Very nicely penned.
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Thank u so much
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मित्र लगता है आपने इश्क़ को खूब जिया है। बेहद खूबसूरत है आपकी कविता। ऐसे ही लिखते रहियेगा।
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Hahaha ….thank u so much bhai
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Kya baat hai!! Fab
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Thank u so much 😇
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Absolutely loved this! बहुत खूब। 😊
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Thank u so much Rupali 😍
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😊😊
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bahut khub
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Dhabywad sir 😇
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MARVELLOUS POST 👏
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Thank u so much 😇
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MOST WELCOME 😊
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Azi janaab !! Mut poocho uska pataa,kahi aisa na ho ki Ghalib ki tarah kahna pade-bade beaabroo hoke tere kooche se hum nikale…..
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Hahaha ….u made this poem more beautifully with ur so beautiful comment like u 😇😇
Ji waise beaabroo to pata puchne par hi kr dia gya 😜 waise jhalak milne k b to chance hote hai hai gali me 😉😉😉
Thank u so much
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Kahi gaali na de baithe aur pitaati na karwa de.aajkal ki ladkiyon ka bharosa nahi.
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Hahahaha…..Aap darao mat 🙄
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Okay.with best wishes.
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तारीफ से परे।उत्तम
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Thank u bhai 😇
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Very well written.
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Thank you for your kind appreciation
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Amazing writing. …
It is so easy to connect with ur poems…this is ur achievement Mr writer….
Keep up the good work😄
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Thank u so much dear 😇😇😇
U cant even imagine my happiness after reading your comment 😉 its always great get beautiful comment from beautiful girl 😉👍🏻
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जानता हूँ, तेरा देख कर मुस्कुराना
इश्क़ का इशारा नहीं होता
जो समझ जाता दिल ये बात तो
मैं आशिक़ तुम्हारा नहीं होता।।
These are my favorite lines… Splendid word👍
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Wow 😍 thank u so much 😇 i m glad u liked it
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