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परछाईं !!

मेरी एक परछाईं थी ||
जब आया मैं दुनिया में,
मेरे साथ वो आयी थी |
ना ही कोई रूप था उसका,
ना ही कोई रंग लायी थी |
मेरी एक परछाईं थी ||

ना ही कोई गुरुर उसे,
खुद पर ना कभी इतरायी थी |
ना जलती थी धूप में वो,
रात से ना वो घबराई थी |
मेरी एक परछाईं थी ||

ना ही उसके नखरे थे,
ना ही कोई लड़ाई थी |
थी झील सी शांत वो,
समुंद्र सी उसकी गहराई थी |
मेरी एक परछाईं थी ||

मुझमे कुछ भी अच्छा हो,
या फिर कोई बुराई थी |
भूल के सारे तथ्यों को वो,
मेरा साथ निभाई थी |
मेरी एक परछाईं थी ||

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Not organized, But you will not find it messy. Not punctual, But will be there at right Time. Not supportive, But will be there, when needed. Not a writer, But you will find this interesting.

47 thoughts on “परछाईं !!

  1. मुझमे कुछ भी अच्छा हो,
    या फिर कोई बुराई थी |
    भूल के सारे तथ्यों को वो,
    मेरा साथ निभाई थी |
    मेरी एक परछाईं थी …
    बहुत खूबसूरती से लिखा आपने।

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  2. Rohittt! ☺ This is an interesting observation. I love the simplicity in this poem. Kitne easily itni depth wali baat keh di. 💙 This line is so beautiful, “थी झील सी शांत वो,
    समुंद्र सी उसकी गहराई थी |”

    But na, I have a doubt. 😆 Shadow never leaves you when you’re in light, but jab dark wale area me jaate hain tab? Tab toh she goes away. 🙁

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    1. Hey Chandani !!! First of all thank u so much for beautiful comment , its always pleasure to receive a beautiful comment from you 😇😇😇 ohhh so really only that 2 lines were deep 😜hahaha kidding , thank u so much 😉
      So now lets discuss your doubt , i believe in dark also shadow is with us only 😜 but due to dark we cant see her 🤣🤣🤣 so if u turn on the light then u will find , she is with u only😜😜😜

      So how is ur exams going?

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      1. Oh no. All the lines were deep. 😒 And woww, Rohit. I thought you won’t be able to answer the question 😹😹 but yayyyy! What a beautiful answer. That changed my thinking. Shadow never leaves us ever. 😃

        And exams finished on Saturday. ☺☺

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  3. You have me,
    They have me.
    But I am always yours.
    You hurt yourself,
    I hurt myself.
    But wound is mine or yours,
    Same is the cure.
    Coloured are you,
    Dark I am.
    I weigh much,
    You might not have even a gram.
    I am the shadow,
    I lie,
    I never die….

    A beautiful poem ☺👌
    First poem about shadow that is positive… Keep it up dear😊

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    1. First thank u so much 😇😇😇 its always nice to receive a beautiful comment from a poet like u 😉😇😇
      Second, receiving a more fantastic poem in comment made this poem more beautiful 😍😍
      Thanks again
      Keep writing and most important keep smiling 🙂🙂🙂

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        1. Ohhh is it , i guess u can try hindi poems also 😉 and yup most important language is just a medium of communication 😜 thanks again for such a beautiful comment and poem 😇😇😇😇

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  4. Such a great comment from a very talented and beautiful writer 😇😇😉😉😍😍 i m not getting words to acknowledge this comment …..this means a looooooooooooottttttttttt 😍🙏🏻

    Like

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