मेरी एक परछाईं थी ||
जब आया मैं दुनिया में,
मेरे साथ वो आयी थी |
ना ही कोई रूप था उसका,
ना ही कोई रंग लायी थी |
मेरी एक परछाईं थी ||
ना ही कोई गुरुर उसे,
खुद पर ना कभी इतरायी थी |
ना जलती थी धूप में वो,
रात से ना वो घबराई थी |
मेरी एक परछाईं थी ||
ना ही उसके नखरे थे,
ना ही कोई लड़ाई थी |
थी झील सी शांत वो,
समुंद्र सी उसकी गहराई थी |
मेरी एक परछाईं थी ||
मुझमे कुछ भी अच्छा हो,
या फिर कोई बुराई थी |
भूल के सारे तथ्यों को वो,
मेरा साथ निभाई थी |
मेरी एक परछाईं थी ||
मुझमे कुछ भी अच्छा हो,
या फिर कोई बुराई थी |
भूल के सारे तथ्यों को वो,
मेरा साथ निभाई थी |
मेरी एक परछाईं थी …
बहुत खूबसूरती से लिखा आपने।
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Thank u so much sir 😇 khushi hui aapko pasand aaya 😎
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Beautiful too good
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Thank u 😇
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😊
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Lovely verses!
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Thank u so much 😇
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Beautiful
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Thank u 😇
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बहुत ही खूबसूरत अभिव्यक्ति हुई है कविता में।
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Sukriya Rajni ji 😇😇
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Rohittt! ☺ This is an interesting observation. I love the simplicity in this poem. Kitne easily itni depth wali baat keh di. 💙 This line is so beautiful, “थी झील सी शांत वो,
समुंद्र सी उसकी गहराई थी |”
But na, I have a doubt. 😆 Shadow never leaves you when you’re in light, but jab dark wale area me jaate hain tab? Tab toh she goes away. 🙁
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Hey Chandani !!! First of all thank u so much for beautiful comment , its always pleasure to receive a beautiful comment from you 😇😇😇 ohhh so really only that 2 lines were deep 😜hahaha kidding , thank u so much 😉
So now lets discuss your doubt , i believe in dark also shadow is with us only 😜 but due to dark we cant see her 🤣🤣🤣 so if u turn on the light then u will find , she is with u only😜😜😜
So how is ur exams going?
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Oh no. All the lines were deep. 😒 And woww, Rohit. I thought you won’t be able to answer the question 😹😹 but yayyyy! What a beautiful answer. That changed my thinking. Shadow never leaves us ever. 😃
And exams finished on Saturday. ☺☺
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Hahahaha 🙈🙊 life is so unpredictable and so answers 🤣🤣🤣 ohh so shadow never leaves us 😉
Great so vacations started?
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Hehe, yayy. I loved that answer. ☺ And naaa, we’ve got just one week’s break. Then college will start again huh. So unfair na. 😼
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Hahaha agreed 😜😜😜😜 so unfair 😉😉
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😹😹
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Wonderfully written😊
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Thank u 😇
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Plz bear with my late reviews but I really look fwd to read ur poems😊
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No worries madame 😇 review matters more than time 😉😉
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Yess…thanx
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Lovely one, so true.
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Thank u so much 😇
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So beautiful…:))
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Thank u so much 😇
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Soo thoughtful….
U r an amazing writer but ittay achae topic soch Pana bhi ek art h….
U never disappoint me as a reader…
Keep it up😃
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Thank u so much 😇😇
Glad u find this topic interesting.
And its blessings to have a reader like u 😍😇😉
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I love the choice of your subjects. They are fantastic. A topic which can hardly be talked about, you gave it such a beautiful frame.
Hats off! Phenomenal. 👏
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Thank u so much dear 😇😇
Are they really that beautiful 😧😧😧 thanks again for such a kind words 😍 your words mean for me 😇
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You have me,
They have me.
But I am always yours.
You hurt yourself,
I hurt myself.
But wound is mine or yours,
Same is the cure.
Coloured are you,
Dark I am.
I weigh much,
You might not have even a gram.
I am the shadow,
I lie,
I never die….
A beautiful poem ☺👌
First poem about shadow that is positive… Keep it up dear😊
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First thank u so much 😇😇😇 its always nice to receive a beautiful comment from a poet like u 😉😇😇
Second, receiving a more fantastic poem in comment made this poem more beautiful 😍😍
Thanks again
Keep writing and most important keep smiling 🙂🙂🙂
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Like everybody I can’t try my hand in hindi… So it is my way to appreciate your post… And yours is amazing than mine… Keep up the good work… May God bless you😊😊
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Ohhh is it , i guess u can try hindi poems also 😉 and yup most important language is just a medium of communication 😜 thanks again for such a beautiful comment and poem 😇😇😇😇
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Amazing thought,beautifully portrayed !
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Thank u so much Aditi 😇
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We all carry such a ‘shadow’ with us…our alter-ego…
Very nicely penned… 🙂
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Yup we do 🙂🙂🙂
Thank u so much 😇
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Kya baat!
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Thank u Amrita 😇
Just give a try to other posts hope u will like then as well 🙂🙂
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How lucky we are to read your enchanting words.Hope we have the previllage to read your writing to infinity times.
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Such a great comment from a very talented and beautiful writer 😇😇😉😉😍😍 i m not getting words to acknowledge this comment …..this means a looooooooooooottttttttttt 😍🙏🏻
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बहुत ही अच्छा लिखा है आपने 👌👌👌👌
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Sukriya bhai 😇
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Yeah.it is a real fact.my shadow walk with me still now.only emotional person can feel dt.
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©मेरी परछाईं
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