अच्छा सुनो !
ये जो “Forever” शब्द,
के साथ कार्ड दी थी |
उसे फाड़ दू, जला दू ?
या फिर सारी बातें
past में बना दू ?
अच्छा सुनो !
ये जो तुम कांच की,
dancing couple दी थी |
उन्हें तोड़ दू, कहीं झोक दू ?
या फिर उनको
वही रोक दू ?
अच्छा सुनो !
वो जो फूल बना,
रुमाल छूटा था मेरे पास |
उसे तुम्हे लौटा दू ?
या फिर टूटे वादों के
आंसू उसमे ही बहा दू ?
अच्छा सुनो !
वो जो कविताये,
लिखी थी तुमपर |
उसके हर लफ्ज़ मिटा दू ?
या फिर अब उनसब को
इस ज़माने को दिखा दू ?
Bahut khub….
sabka jawab aaya
Tumhara intejaar hai,
Kya karun intejar ko,…??
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Thank u ☺️😇
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Ek dum badiya !!
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Thank u Deepika ☺️😇
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Sublime poetry. I could the emotions behind every word.
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Sorry for the wrong comment.
I wanted to say that I could feel the emotions behind every word.
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No problem 😇
Thank u so much , glad u can feel that 😇
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😃
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बहुत ही अच्छे से व्यक्त किया है भावनाओं को आपने।
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Dhanywad Rajni ji 😇
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समय मिले तो मेरे ब्लॉग पर जरूर टहल कीजिएगा मैंने अभी कुछ पोस्ट किया है आप लोगों की टिप्पणी का इंतजार रहता है।
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Emotions are palpable in each memoir and in every line. Well done mate. Hinglish at its best 😀
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Thank u so much mate 😇 it means a lot ☺️
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For me, it’s really nostalgic and relatable. It’s amazing. I so loved it. 😊👏👏👏
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Thank u so much dear ☺️😇
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Pyar ke bina bhi maut hai aur pyar ke badh bhi maut !!!
Abh jab marna hi hai toh itna kya sochna aaj pyar me marke hi dekhte hai !!!
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Wah kya baat 👌🏻👍🏻 shi kaha aapne 😜
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Shukriya 😜
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So much realistic…Mind blowing.
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Thank u so much 😇
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बहुत बढिया रोहित जी ..
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Thank u so much Rituja ☺️😇
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Striking one❤
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Thank u so much Shweta ji 😇
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Dikha do jamaane ko sab,janaab!!vo nazm suni he kya kabhi-mera kuch saamaan tumhaare pass padha he,vo saamaan lauta do……
Hargiz mut lautaana nahi to likhane ka sabab choot jaayega.
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Hahaha pakka dikha du jamaane ko ? 🤔
Ji hai suni hai 🙊😇
Arey haan aisa to maine socha hi nhi ki likhne ka sabab hai wo ☺️ ab na lauta raha maine kuch b 😇
Thank u so much Aruna ji 😇 and it was a fiction 😉
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Okay.right.
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मान गए Rohit भाई!! 🙏
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Sukriya bhai 😇
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भावनाओं की अच्छी अभिव्यक्ति !
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Sukriya
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😊😊
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बेहद दिलदार से सवाल और pyaar me tamnaayein tadap uthi thi unke sawal dhundti huyi…kavita dil ko bahot bhayi…
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Ji shukriya ☺️ khushi hui ki aapko pasand aayi 😇
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Beautiful Rohit…
Reminded me jo Jagjit Singh’s ghazals..mera kuch samaan..and baat niklegi to door talak jaaegi..
Loved it..:) 🙂
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Thank u so much Manasi ☺️☺️ means a lot 😇😇😇 thanks for your kind appreciation 😇
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🙂 🙂
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Amazing sir… Go slow. Success is nearer with this pace😜 kidding… Loved it.. 😊 keep writing always… Or atleast more often
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Hahaha….thank u madam ☺️ means a lot 😊
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Acha suniye
Ye jo kaveeta likhi h aapne
Issay padh kr bhul jana mushkil h
Toh kya ankho m yaad bna lu issay…
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Speechless 🙊🙈 thank u so much
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Amazing writing ….loved it ..keep it up👍👍
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And i truly loved ur comments ☺️
Thank u so much sikha😇
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Very nice, your every word reaches to heart directly 👌👌
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Thanks you so much Shambhavi !!
Glad you liked it 🙂
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Aacha suno.. Iss zamane ko batlado.. Is junooniyat ke phal..!! Ye jahan ko malum hota har Ek ishq ka anjam.. Toh dilon me sukane wala sukoon hota…
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Beautiful lines 🙂 thanks for stopping by and sharing your though 🙂
Happy new year
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Happy New Year…!!
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