कुछ शब्द है,
जो मेरी जुबानी है ।
न कोई किस्सा है,
न कोई कहानी है ।।
न कोई डाकू है,
न कोई राजा-रानी है ।
एक बूढी औरत है,
उसकी ही जिंदगानी है ।।
न शौहर है, न बेटा,
न बिटिया रानी है ।
चेहरे पर झुर्रियां है,
और आँखों में पानी है
न यादो का सहारा है,
न कोई निशानी है ।
आफताब, चांदनी बेरंग है,
अब तो जीना ही बेईमानी है ।।
न किसी से उम्मीद है
न किसी से परेशानी है ।
फिर भी थम न रही जिंदगी,
जाने किसकी मेहरबानी है ।।
न जाने कितनो की,
ऐसी ही जिंदगानी है ।
न खाने को खाना है,
न पीने को पानी है ।।
कुछ शब्द है ये,
जो मेरी जुबानी है ।
न कोई किस्सा है,
न कोई कहानी है ।।
Waah Rohit…Bahut marmik..
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Thank u so much Abhay😊
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Behtarin kavita.
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Sukriya 😊😊
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Amazing! Kitne beautifully describe kiya hai aapne us woman ki life ko. I am touched. 😔 Aise kitne saare log hain humare aas pass. I wish hum unko thodi si bhi happiness de paayein toh kitna achha hoga. Loved this poem. How are you, Rohit? 😄❤
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Thank u so much for reading it and commenting in detail 😊
I am good , thanks😊
How r u
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Haha, I am good too! 😄
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Stunned..want to read it again and again.Astonished by the unique approach that your word bears.
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Thank u so much for your encouraging words 😊😊😊
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good rhyme.
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Thank u 😊
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So nice Rohit ji.
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Thank u
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Welcome.
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An emotional one Rohit!
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Thanks for encouraging me with your words 🙂
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जबरदस्त रोहित जी,
क्रांतिकारी पंक्तियां
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Thanks Bhai 🙂
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बहुत खूब लिखा है। रोहित जी मेरा बुक पब्लिश हो रहा है जिंदगी के एहसास नाम से।
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Sukriya 😊😊
Mubarak ho, kab publish ho rahi and which publications ?
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Waah kavita jivan ka arth samjhaati huyi jivan ko samjhne ki sikh deti huyi👍
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Thank u so much Sonali😊
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Oh.more touch of pain in your poem-“na koi kissa he na koi kahaani he”…lazwaab.dear!!
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Thank u so much for kind words of appreciation 😊😊
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Most welcom for your nice poem.😊
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This poem is really very deep!! Beautiful! Loved it!!
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Thank u so much .
Glad u liked it shared your thoughts😇
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This poem is really very deep!! Beautiful! Loved it!
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Very deep poem! Beautiful! Loved it!
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😍☺️☺️☺️
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बेहतरीन कविता रोहित जी,दिल को तस्सली हुई की , हिंदी अभी जीवित है , और मौलिक सोचा वाले भी
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Thank u so much for your kind words .
Keep writing and keep reading 😊
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Wow. Cool.. Mast.. I’m speechless.. 😍
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Thank u 😇😇 keep writing and keep smiling
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We read, appreciate and forget. Actually we just ignore it. Ignore the reality that someday this could be us. And in ignorance we search for our sanity, while we find it never.
Why am I blabbering?! Because sir this is really thought provoking. Thankyou for sharing this with us.😊😊
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With your great words, i am speechless ……thank u so much for reading my every post and appreciating it with your very kind words ☺️☺️☺️
Thank u so much madam😇😇
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What else are fans for?😉 It’s always my pleasure… 😊😍
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🤔🤔🤔 next post 😉
Sukriya 😇
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What a thought sir 👌👌u make me speechless everytime…”Na koi kissa h na koi kahani hai ” great lines..
Keep it up 😄😄
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Thank u so much madam☺️ it was not possible without your support ……thanks for your words 😇😇
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Shikha rai keep it up😝😜😍😍
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The poem touches the core. Written as if the poet the “has observed the ” boodhi aurat” closely.
SImply loved these lines, so full of hope:
फिर भी थम न रही जिंदगी,
जाने किसकी मेहरबानी है ।।
Life must go on!
Stay blessed Rohit.
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Thank u so much for your encouraging words and blessings .
Keep smiling sir and be happy ☺️
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Very beautiful and sad.
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Thank u ☺️
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Beautiful lines❤❤
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Thank u so much☺️☺️
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Very beautifully written!! 🙂
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Thank u so much 😇
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सच में दिल को छू गई।
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Thank u so much for stopping by and sharing your thought 🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻
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