वर्षो पहले की ये कहानी थी,
सुनी अपनी दादी की जुबानी थी |
हस्तिनापुर का सिंहासन था,
एक अँधा राजा और एक अंधी रानी थी ||
दो पक्षों की ये दुश्मनी पुरानी थी,
दांव पर राजपाठ, रिश्ते और पंचाली थी |
जीत गए सब कौरव,और पांच की नाकामी थी,
पासे के खेल में, मामा की बेईमानी थी ||
इंतकाम की आग थी मन में ,
मायामहल की बेइज़्ज़ती चुकानी थी |
घसीटी गयी रानी सरेआम बाल से,
इस अन्याय पे बंद सबकी वाणी थी ||
पांचाली के हश्र पर, गर्व था कुछ को,
बाकि सबकी आँखे शर्म से झुक जानी थी |
उतार के उनके वस्त्र को सभा में,
कईयों को दिखानी अपनी मर्दानी थी ||
खींच रहा था दुःशासन साड़ी उनकी,
चीख पुकार मचा रही पांचाली थी |
न था कोई भी रोकने वाला अन्याय को,
पूरी सभा के जीवन पर, ये एक बदनामी थी ||
ना उठ रहा था कोई बचाने को ,
पर द्रोपदी को खुद की इज़्ज़त बचानी थी |
देख खुद को बेबस कौरवो के सामने,
बस भगवान से ही पुकार लगनी थी ||
चीर खींच रहा था दुःशासन बेरहमों की तरह,
हे गोविन्द! हे मुरारे! हे कृष्ण, बस यही द्रौपदी की वाणी थी |
थे खुद गोविन्द ऊपर, उन्हें भक्त की लाज बचानी थी,
चमत्कार था उनका, साड़ी बढती जानी थी ||
हर रहा था चीर, सब कौरवो की मनमानी थी,
मौन धृतराष्ट्र, भीष्म, द्रोणाचार्य और गांधारी थी |
बढ़ती गयी साडी और खींचता रहा चीर,
कृपा के पीछे, स्वंय सुदर्शनधारी थे |
सभा में साडी का ढेर लग गया था,
एक अबला नारी को निवस्त्र करने वाला |
मर्द अब चीर खींच-खींच के थक गया था,
देख ये अद्द्भुत दृश्य, कहा कवि ने ||
“अंतहीन है ये साड़ी थी,
बची इज़्ज़त जो प्यारी थी |
सभा में हर ओर बस साड़ी थी
क्या वो साड़ी थी, या फिर रानी थी ||
क्या वो रानी की ही साड़ी थी ,
देख ये चकित सभा सारी थी |
भाई मानी जिसे रानी थी ,
चमत्कारी वो सुदर्शनधारी था ||”
देख खुद हो हारता दुर्योधन ने मुँह खोला,
“महारानी बना के रखूँगा तुझे मैं दासी” |
ये बोल खुद की जंघा पर बैठने को बोला,
सुन ये गदाधारी भीम का खून खौला ||
ऐसे ही हुआ “महाभारत” का आगाज़,
हर एक घर में जो फैला हुआ है आज |
माना की युद्ध नहीं उस जैसा
पर हर एक के मन वही बैर का अंदाज़ ||
Please do share your opinion on this post, which will help me to decide either i have to write more similar type posts or not.
Thank you so much for your time and support 🙂
That’s something great,i have read recently.
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Thank u so much Ayush 🙂
this really matters a lot , thanks for your kind words 🙂
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क्या कहे लाजवाब लिखा है।
नारी है कि साड़ी है,
की साड़ी बीच नारी है,
के माध्यम से दुनिया को बहुत ही सुंदर संदेश देने में आप एक दम कामयाब हुए हैं।लाजवाब है।
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Bahut bahut sukriya sir 🙏🏻
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Nice….
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Thank u so much Gaytri 😇
Glad u liked it 😇
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I just love the usage of words..
Powerful words ….
Very new Nd different …it’s great to read a different pattern of writing…
Andazzae bayaan Kuch Naya sa hai…
Keep it up😃
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Ohhh is it 😧 i feel ur words more powerful to motivate me 😍 waise aapka andaz b poem k sath badla hua lag raha 😉 thank u so much dear 😇 its always nice to get comment from u 😇
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Composition bhut shandar hai….
Kamal ka likha hai….
Mythological poetry…
wow!!!
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Thank u so much Utkarsh 😇😇 glad u liked 😍 thanks for your kind words
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Ur welcome 🙂
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And I loved it… Just beautiful, phenomenal and amazing.
Magnificence in every word, in every line. Fantastically done Rohit! ☺️👏👏
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Thank u so much Bhavika 😇😇. Thanks for your kind words 🙂🙂
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Not just beautiful. Not just splendid. Not just wow. It is beyond my level of appreciation. You should definitely keep writing such poems… Loved it absolutely. 👍👍😊😊
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Not Just comments , not just appreciation….But its encouragement, motivation and feeling for me 🙂
i am speechless 😉
thank you so much for your kind word ❤
Thanks again 🙂
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I absolutely loved it. You should really go forward for it. I certainly want to read more of it
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Thank u so much Charvi 🙂 thanks for your appreciation and motivation 🙂
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You deserve it all
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Beautiful
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Thank u 😇
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रोहित बहुत अच्छी पकड़ है आपकी आपके शब्दों पर..,, Incredible Post Dear👍
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Thank u so much Jyoti 😍😍 this means a lot 😇😇😇
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Yayy. Hi Rohit. While reading this poem, a picture of the ancient kings and queens came into my mind, jaise wo tv serials me dikhate haina. 😃 Beautifully written. I would like to read more poems like this. Keep writing. ☺👦
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Hey Chandani 👻 i always get excited when i get comment from u ….coz i knw it will surprise me 😍😍😍
Yup maine b wo serials hi imagine kar k likha hai 🙊🙊 thank u so much 😍 kya sach me ar aisa likhu ?? 😧😧
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Hahah! Yayyy! 🙆 Such a sweet compliment huh, mere comments me kya surprising hai aisa! 😂😂 And yess, aise kitne saare historical wale shows aate na TV me, wahin se dekhke thodi inspiration lekar likh lo. 👦 Achha likh rahe ho. 💙☺
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Hahaha ! Ab kya surprising hai ye hi pata chal jaye to surprise kaisa 😉😉😉 hahahahaha likhne k liye to aaplogo k motivation and comments b bht inspiring hai 😍 but yup i ll try more 🙂🙂 and thanks again 😍
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😂😂😂 Chalo this is good. Atleast mere comments suspense create karte hainnn. 🙆 Yayy, I’m waiting to read and comment further. 😄
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Hahahaha but i cant wait for ur comments 🙈🙊 so will post something soon 😉
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Yayyyyyy! 😆😆👦
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Very nice…
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Thank u poonam 🙂🙂🙂
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😊😊😊
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Nice improvisation… Keep it up Rohit.
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Thank u so much Abhay 😇
Keep writing , keep reading and keep motivating 😍
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Mate u are already super motivated. Spread the linguistic excellence
that you possess.
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Blessed and overwhelmed 😇😇😇🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻
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Mahabharat has always inspired thought provoking writing. This is one book most of us can relate to as the characters are very human. No one is perfect.
Good attempt. Yet it could be chiselled further.
Your blog has been beautifully designed. It was a pleasure visiting it.
Looking forward to more.
Namaste.
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Thank u so much for your kind and motivating words 🙂
yup very true , in Mahabharata characters are so human , thanks for your time
Give a try to other posts , hope u will like them too 🙂
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A great poem on the epical incident from The Mahabharata…
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Thank u so much Mani 😇😇 this really matters for me 🙂🙂
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My pleasure… 🙂
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😇😇
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Lajawaab…bahut hi sundar prastuti.
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Thank u so much bhai 😍😇
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Very beautifully written dear.
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Thank u so much Moushmi 🙂
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Laajwaab..unbeatable…unstoppable…sunder…
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Sukriya …..dhanywad…..thank u 😍
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उत्कृष्ट लेखन।👌👌
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Sukriya Siddhant 🙂
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A person must, first write for him/herself.. Satisfying yourself by writing your thoughts is the first step towards fetching opinions of others. Keep up the work and write for yourself not for others. ☺
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Hahaha first of all thank u so much for your comment 😇 i m writing for myself only madame 😉 but opinions help us to improve ourselves sometimes 😇
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waah…really nice
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Thank u so much 😇
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waah really nice
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Thank u so much 😇😇
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बहुत खूब। बहुत ही अच्छा से वर्णन किया है।
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Thank u so much Rajani Ji 🙂
Your comment really matters 😉
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What a great poem bt a question still now for me.why had anybody not protested dt wrong work n saved Draupadi?dis question will be always in my heart.
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Bahut sahi kaha aapne:
ऐसे ही हुआ “महाभारत” का आगाज़,
हर एक घर में जो फैला हुआ है आज |
माना की युद्ध नहीं उस जैसा
पर हर एक के मन वही बैर का अंदाज़ ||
True image of today’s times!
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Thank u so much sir.
Glad u liked my thoughts
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