यूँही फिर खुद को परेशान कर लिया |
तेरे ख्यालो में सुबह से शाम कर लिया ||
न जाने क्यों चाहने लगा था तुझे इतना |
की खुद को ही मैंने बे-नाम कर लिया ||
थक गया था तुझे बुला बुला कर |
बुलाना छोड़ कर थोड़ा आराम कर लिया ||
उठाएगा न कोई भी ऊँगली अब तुझ पर |
सारी बेवफाई जो मैंने अपने नाम कर लिया ||
Beautiful
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Thank you so much 🙂
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वाह , बहुत शानदार 👍
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Dhanywad bhai apka 🙂
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nice one…rohit
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Thank you ma’am
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Nice one.. 🙂
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Thank u 🙂
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वाह
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Dhanywad
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admirable lines…
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Thank u so much mohit 🙂
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Bhai bahut khoob ❤
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Dhanywad 🙂
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I am new here..do support bhai. 😊
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Sure bhai…even i m reading your posts only and its really nice, u can find comments on your post 🙂
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एक और अच्छी रचना ।
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Dhanywad 🙂
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खूब फ़रमाया..👌
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Dhanywad Shweta 🙂
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Lovely ❤️
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Thank u. 🙂
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ये बेवफाई जो आपने अपने नाम कर ली है…
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ये जो बेवफाई आपने अपने नाम कर ली है….लगे है जैसे प्यार कि गेहराई आपने नाप ली है….गेहराई आपने नाप ली है….
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wah , kya baat h , jabardast lines 🙂 😀
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Dil khush ho gya kavita padh ke…acchi acchi kavita padhne ko mile roj to raat ban jaati hai….thank you rohit for sharing these poems with us…
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Thank you so much for your kind words 🙂 thanks for always being der to support me 😀
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Nice one☺
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Thank u 🙂
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👌👌👌👌
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🙂 🙂 🙂
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बहुत ही अच्छा लिखा है। थक गया – – – – – – – – ।आराम कर लिया का भाव अच्छा है।
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Dhanywad 🙂
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Adorable yaar…👌👌👌👌
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Thank you so much Jyoti 🙂
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Oh my God !!dis is true love.
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Thank you so much for your kind words 🙂
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Most welcome.
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Rohit! 😄 I didn’t understand the last wala line, please explain huh.
“सारी बेवफाई जो मैंने अपने नाम कर लिया” Kaise? 😬
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Hahahaha……interesting question 😜 lol….u made me speechless 😉 i m not going to answer this that too here 😉 waise aapko “kaise” kia ye seekh kar kya krna hai 😜
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Arey karna kuch nai hai huh. 😛 Mujhe nai aya samajh meaning. Samjhaao, warna how will I review this poem without understanding? 😆
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Hahahaha…….emotional card 🙄🙄🙄
Ok thats means i took all the blames on my name and all the mistakes on my name 😜 understood? 😉
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Achha aisa 😹 haan I understood abiii. Deep meaning this was. Nice poem. 💙☺☺
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Hehehe finally i m able to explain 😜
Thank u 🙏🏻
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Deep Nd beautiful…😃
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Thank u so much Shikha ☺️☺️☺️ thanks for ur kind words
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Wow!🙄☺😃😍
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😉😍😎thanks
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