न बदला कुछ भी यहाँ |
पर मौसम कुछ बेकरार सा है ||
तेरे चेहरे की चमक न रही अब यहाँ |
और मेरा सुकून भी कहीं फरार सा है ||
बदल दिया तूने घर का पता |
पर तेरी गलियों से आज भी प्यार सा है ||
पता है तू न लौटेगी कभी |
पर आँखों को तेरा इंतज़ार सा है ||
यूँ तो मिलता हूँ सबसे मुस्कुरा कर |
पर ये कमबख़्त दिल अब बीमार सा है ||
पर ये कमबख़्त दिल अब बीमार सा है ||बहुत खूब!! शानदार !!
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Dhanywad 🙂
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जबरदस्त…👍👍👍💐💐
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Dhanywad 🙂
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The last lines! 😻😻
Hii Rohit! Bohhot pyaara likhha aapne, very touching. I wish she returns someday, then sab happy happy hojayegaa! 😃 And btw, I also love the picture used here. Beautiful. 💙
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Thank you so much Chandni !!
It was fiction only , actually movie dekhte waqt ye topic mila to main us par hi likh lia 😀
Thanks again for your kind words 😀
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Ahaaan! 🤓 Nice, creative work. 😇
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Thank you again 🙂 😀
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😂😂 You’re welcome huh.
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Wah wah! 👏👏
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Thank you so much 🙂
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बहुत खूब !!!
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Dhanywaad 🙂
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बहुत खूब
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Dhanywad 🙂
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The pain in the heart, the long wait and the eyes searching for that one glimpse of your beloved……Bahut accha likha aapne Rohit!!
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Thank you so much ma’am, its always good to hear kind words 🙂
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A wonderful piece.
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Thank you so much 🙂
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Welcome dear
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👍
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🙂 🙂
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Beautiful…🙂🤗😘
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Thank u dear 🙂
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रोहित जी एक और अच्छी रचना
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Dhanywaad bhai 🙂
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Awsm post
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Thank u 🙂
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Awesome.kisi nazar ko tera intezaar aaj bhi he……..zindgi ke safar me guzar jaatein hein jo mukaam vo phir nahi aate…….aapki poem na jaane kitne geet yaad dila deti he aur na jaane kitne manjar nighaahon me tair jaate he ashqon ki manind……khoobsoorat si kavita ke liye shukriya.
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Wow…its always nice to get a beautiful comment from an amazing writer 🙂
Thank you so much 🙂
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Most welcome.dear.
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🙂
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Alwayz falls in love with poems…this is finest…in deep love with dis…
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Thank you so much dear 🙂 keep smiling and keep shining 🙂
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आपके कविता पर कुछ अर्ज करती हूँ कहीं का पढा है याद आ गया बस थोड़ा सा शब्दों का हेर फेर है। इंतजार है तो इजहार होना चाहिए। आप को तो चेहरे से विचार नहीं अखबार होना चाहिए। क्यों रोहित कैसा लगा विचारों का खेल शब्दों से।
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*विचार नहीं विचार है।
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*विमार
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Wah kya khoob kaha hai…
Dil khush ho gaya 🙏🏻
Thanks again for stopping and sharing your thoughts 😇
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