आज भी तो जुल्फें तेरी आँखों पर आती होगी न
चिढ कर तुम उन्हें अपने कान में फसाती होगी न
ये सब देख कोई आज भी मुस्कुराता होगा न
तेरे मासूम सवालों में वो भी खो जाता होगा न
क्या आज भी तुझे पसंद है चाँद को देखना
गुस्से में यूँ घर के सामान फेकना
आज भी तो गुस्से में, नाक लाल हो जाती होगी
कुछ देर रो कर, भूखे पेट सो जाती होगी
क्या आज भी अंधेरो से डर जाया करती हो
बात न सुनने पर, किसी से भी लड़ जाया करती हो
आज भी तो किसी का साथ चाहिए होता होगा न
मन किसी के ख्यालो में दिन रात खोता होगा न
क्या अब भी मन ही मन में गाना गुनगुनाती हो
भिन्डी की सब्जी अभी भी नही खाती हो ?
क्या आज भी लोगो पर, वैसे ही हक़ जताती हो
दिन भर की हर एक बात, शाम में उन्हें बताती हो
आज भी तो वैसे ही मुस्कुराती होगी न
किसी भी धुन पर थिरक जाती होगी न
अपनी तारीफ सुन कर शरमाती होगी न
कभी तो मेरी भी याद आती होगी न
बहुत सुन्दर
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धन्यवाद 🙂 😀
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Awwww…This is so cute…
I just smiled reading it…🙈🙈🙈🙈🙈
Thanks for the smile Rohit…🙈
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Ohhh wow, thank you so much ….i m glad that i written something, which make u smile….keep smiling dear and keep writing 🙂
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😊😊😊😊😍
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Such a beautiful one…..haan, shayad woh aaj bhi waise hi hogi…….👌
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Thank you so much Radhika ……hahaha….honi to waise hi chaheye…but last line i m not sure ;)…..thanks again…keep smiling and keep writing
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उफ्फ… Nostalgic…😊 खूब लिखा।
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Thank u so much Abhay……ufff(lagta h kisi ki yaad aa gyi 😉 )
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आप के दर्द को कविता में झलकता देख उफ्फ किया साहब 😉😉
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hahahah…chalo dard to jhalka 😉
nhi to logo ko to yahi sikayat hoti h ki dard nhi h Kavita me 😀
“Sahab” reminds me dialouge from movie “Dabaang”…thapadd se dar nhi lagta sahab 😛
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wow !!! you have expressed what i am thinking from last few months….does she still have that cal voice? does she still love the moon? is her walk still like ‘Gajgamini”.or she has changed, her taste has changed.
Beautifully penned bro.
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Wow wow wow…..such a beautiful comment to start my day…..ha bhai i guess waise hi hogi, with som modification and some change, not sure about last line :D….but the best part is all memories are still same;)……thank you so much bro for making my day 🙂
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Yaad kuch kuch meri bhi aati to hogi………lazawaab.
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Dhanywaad ……dhanywaad
Dhanywaad
🙂
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Welcome dear.
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वाह !! बड़ी मीठी और एहसास भरी कविता. 😊
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Thank u ma’am 🙂
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Very nice brother, http://samisportsupdatesindia31.wordpress.com
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Thank you so much 🙂
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👌👌👌
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🙂 🙂 🙂
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wow damn good…
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Thank yo so much 🙂
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Wow yr..i was smiling while reading the whole poem..
Very well written..Wow..Keep writing..!!🌸..Awesome
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Wow….i m glad that my poem made u smile….thank you so much….keep smiling 🙂
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Bahut khub…khubsurat ehsaas..
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Dhanywad bhai 🙂
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Bht sundar kavita hai..too beautiful..
Hey give a look at my poems as well..Am sure you will like them!!..
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Thank you so much.. Sure will read them 🙂
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Great post
Amazing
Visit mine
http://shivashishspeaks.wordpress.com/
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Thanks ,surely will visit them
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Rohit! This made me emotional. 😢 This is one of the best poem of yours. I have no words today. Itniiii pyaaari poem! ❤ This is why I run away from ‘love’, cause incomplete love hurts sooo much, I cannot even imagine what you must have felt, when you cannot be with the one person you love so much, huh, even the thought of it hurts me. 😢
This is sooo perfectly written, it is overwhelming to know that you love her so intensely, you know her so perfectly. I am in awe!
Keep writing more of this. ☺
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Wow wow wow….<3 i m in love with your words 🙂
yeah actually it hurts , but also sometimes those memories brings smile on your face , some time topics for your post 😀 (kidding)…so everything has two side , its all depends what we are selecting.
But yes its very hard to move, like ek time par aap us person ki har choti badi baat jante the aur phir achanak se koi khabar nhi rahti…
By the way , thank you so much for your great words ….i am taking screenshot of this comment, so whenever i will feel that i can't write poem…then i ll read this comment 😀
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Awwww! So sweet of you, hehe. 😻 Pehle batate toh i would’ve written more encouraging lines na. 😂
And exactly what I wanted to say, suddenly wo person chale jaye uske baad aapke paas kya bachta except remembering them with your poems? Huh. 🙁
And btw, nice Blog DP! 🤓
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Hahaha….u missed this time….no worries try next tym :p. thanks for compliment (for dp) 😉 😀
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☺☺☺
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nice post…..
Thanks For Sharing
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Thank you Kavita 🙂
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Waah
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Thank you:)
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Happy Republic day rohit
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Happy Republic Day ma’am
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Waah… Beautifully written.. 🙂
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Thank you 🙂
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मेरी ज़ुबाँ पर ताला लगा दिया है।
एक कसक है जो झलक रही है,,
जो छोड़ गया उससे जुड़ी यादों से वार्तालाप लाजवाब, क्या कहूँ,,,,, सिर्फ लाजवाब कहकर अपनी बात खत्म कर दूँ।
पर दिल नही मानता नहीं है।
एक एक Line में वो अपनापन और वो प्यार खूबसूरत पिरोया है।।
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Wow….one of the best comment :D…i cant express.my thanks in words. I m glad u liked it and loved it . Thank you so much 🙂
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Emotions in depth. Nice writing.
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Thank you jyoti 🙂
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Kahin koi ek khoobsoort si ladki magar savnli si magar bahut khoobsoorat……….chalo khat likhe ji me aata to hoga,takiye me munh chipaati to hogi,mera naam leke muskuraati to hogi…….
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ji bilkul shi pakda apne ….behud hi khoobsurat :P…..
ha muskurni to chaheye 😛
THanks you so much for your always support 🙂
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Wonderful comment.welcome dear.
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🙂 🙂
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😊😊😊😊
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