तो क्या जो अब जुबान हर
शब्द पर लड़खड़ाया करती है
मेरे सफ़ेद बाल
मेरी उम्र बयां करती है
तो क्या ये आंसू पोछने वाले
हाथ हर वक़्त कांपते है
थोड़ा भी चल लेने पर
मेरे फेफड़े हाँफते है
फिर भी ओझल नज़रो से
तेरा चेहरा साफ़ दिखाई देता है
पापा तुम सठिया गए
ऐसा हमारा बेटा कहता है
कहता मेरी हरकतों से
उसका परिवार बेहाल हो गया है
झूठ बोलता है की तुझे दुनिया से
गए हुए कई साल हो गया है
अभी सुबह नाश्ते पे तो तुम
मेरे साथ ही बैठी थी
मुझे अकेला नहीं छोड़ोगी
ऐसा दिनों रात कहती थी
अपना दर्द मैं किसी से
कह नहीं पता हूँ
दो बातें किसी से करने को
दिन रात तरस जाता हूँ
मुझे भी हमेशा के लिए
सुला दो ना
खुद आ जाओ या फिर
मुझे वहां बुला लो ना
Heart tuching…
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Thank u so much 😇
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Very touchy, old age is a bitter truth and we must respect our elders coz one day we will also b in their place.
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Yup it is a bitter truth 😐
I do agree, in old age they deserve more care, attention and support ☺️ thank u so much for sharing your thought
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Kya khub Kaha gaya hai ki “aksar wahi diye haathon ko jala dete hai, jinhe hum Hawa se bacha rahe hote hai” Separation is the brutal truth and aging is the sad reality. You fantastically covered both the aspects. Hats off sir. Amazing job yet again. 👏👏😊
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Beautiful line Bhavika 😍
I do agree and yup thank u so much for liking it and appreciating it …..means a lot 😇
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It’s recited by Gulzar sahab. Ought to be beautiful. 😊
Keep writing. 😊
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Ohh ok🙊 yup i m trying ☺️
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Haha! You are doing a fabulous job dear. Believe me. 😊☺️
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Ohhh bhavika its means a lot 😍
But these days i m struggling with posts …..not able to write 😉 hope this block will finish sone
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Well, nobody knows better than me.! Even I am going through art block. Lot of thoughts but failing to frame it well. Hope it finishes soon for both of us! 😀😂
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Yup , hope so 🤞🏻
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I am just speechless after reading this poem…
What a theme !!!!! what a presentation !!!!!
Outstanding.
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Thank u so much bro 😍 its pleasure to have beautiful comment from u😇
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Very deep!! ❤️❤️
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Thank u so much 🙏🏻
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Its really frustrating sometimes when you don’t get words to express how much you loved something.
Heart breaking reality of life. This could not get any better… Creativity to an ultimate level… Hats off👍☺
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Yup i can feel tha frustration right now , i m not getting words for acknowledging your comment……😐
By tge way thank u so much ……this makes my day 😇
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Pleasure is all mine. Stay blessed☺
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You too ☺️
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nice 👌
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Thank u
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Truth of today felt
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Good
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Thank u
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बहुत ही अच्छा अभिव्यक्ति हुई है कविता में ह
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Ji sukriya 🙏🏻
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Oh my God.!!wonderful expression of love.
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Thank u so much😇
Its always my pleasure to receive words from u 😇
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Most welcome,dear!!
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Bahut badhiya
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Sukriya ☺️
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